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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you haven't updated in so long! I hope you'll continue the story... I want to know what happened to Jack to make him as he is, and if he'll ever get some of the personality Will knew back... and off course the relationship but that can wait ;-) please tell me you haven't left the fandom/stopped writing fanfiction?
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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!
I'm really enjoying your story so far. Can't wait to see what is going to happen next. I really want to know what you have haunting Jack from his past. Hopefully it will come out at some point? Keep up the excellent story and post soon! :)
I'm really enjoying your story so far. Can't wait to see what is going to happen next. I really want to know what you have haunting Jack from his past. Hopefully it will come out at some point? Keep up the excellent story and post soon! :)
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thats the right addy!
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's a good idea, and you have great descritive language here.
But I feel I should point something out that has been pointed out to me, jack doesn't really talk like a pirate.
in the movie there was a drawl in his speech but it was never as strong as what you have.
I just thought I'd mention it, but then again, you have had him change a little, so it might just be part of the character.
Anyway, good general idea. Hope you update again soon.
But I feel I should point something out that has been pointed out to me, jack doesn't really talk like a pirate.
in the movie there was a drawl in his speech but it was never as strong as what you have.
I just thought I'd mention it, but then again, you have had him change a little, so it might just be part of the character.
Anyway, good general idea. Hope you update again soon.