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Please! I need more! This is such a great start, I can't wait fore more.

Aj

I love it! I want you to update as soon as you can, savvy?! It's so angst-y and full of emotion! I hope you continue this as soon as possible, because I want to kill this Raven guy, and I hope that Jack makes it painful and prolonged! No touchy! Will belongs to Jack!!!!

*ahem* Well, don't mind me. Just a crazy fangirl, so no problems, okies?

Elven

I really enjoying this story so far!! It looks an interesting plot, although I'm surprised Norrington's kidnapped him - especially that he was a pirate. I would have thought that Barbossa would have done that, but I c an see why you choose Norrington, he seems so up-standing and umm...moral - the perfect society gentleman. No one would guess he was a pirate, but I'm sure it's easy enough to make Norrington really evil, I get the feeling he's really into control...and will get very angry very quickly if his orders aren't met - or am I reading too much into his character?

It's gonna be interesting to see how Norrington treats both Will and Elizabeth, will they be around each other - able to comfort each other or will they be locked away. What I'm most looking forward to is Jack - how he finds out about Norrington - and especially his reaction when he does. Hmmm....

I love the idea for the fic, it's orginal and there's a lot of material to work with, and even if Jack manages to rescue Will and Elizabeth there's still going e the the aftermath, it seems unlikely that they'll just be OK after they get away from him. I can't wait to see Jack, especially the Jack/Norrington and Jack/Will interaction. I'm beginning to really hate Norrington already, it kind of easy to make him into a villian, one that you can really hate. Also I'd love to know Governer Swann's rection to this - I know he loves Elizabeth and I get the feeling he cares for Will. I just feel so sorry for Will and Elizabeth, partically Will.

I really hope you write some more of this story - i've become hooked on it already and I can't wait to read some more, please PLEASE write some more soon!

Imogen

Nice start; I'm looking forward to seeing more of this. It's original (at least as far as I know), which makes it so much more fun to read. Just don't wait too long with bringing Jack in! :) We need him in the story... Keep up the good work!

Cam

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOhhhhh thats good, evil bastard, and poor Will, very well written and a great and original idea.
More soon please else i might go mad
Rose

OHHHHHH

Good story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next. Poorl. Il. I always knew Norrington was up to no good. Please hurry and post so Jack can come save poor Will. Keep up the good work

Wow, that was good. I sill love Norri to all bits, but as long as Jack/Will have lots of comfort sex, it's okay. ^_~

I like it! The Norrington/Will pairing is not used enough, in my opinion. I think the best way for it to be done is through non-con. You did a good job with it, and I can't wait to see what happens next (hopefully more Will agnst, and maybe some angry Jack and Elizabeth). Update soon, please!!!

That was very well written and a good plot idea. I have trouble seeing Norrington this way, however.

Oh dude!!! This is a fucking sweet story!! I am loving it!! First I've ever read where Norry is a pirate, I love it! Please update soon!