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for Only Forever

by flameboi

person mona.thompson@hotmail.com
schedule August 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Talk about hottttt! That was really fucking amazing. I love how my Goblin King made Toby forget his pain...but it was for a more selfish reason...so he would be the only one...the only thing that Toby could need or want. Damn I miss The Goblin King. But he will forever be alive and well in The Underground♥

person Anon
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've never read Labyrinth slash before this and I gotta say I liked it. I always liked Jareth and your story kept him true to his character. I got a warm fuzzy every time Jareth and Toby cuddled. ^_^
person Lorenquille
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was just perfect!
I never thought of this pairing before, but your story caught my eye. Curiosity compelled me to read it, and I'm very glad it did.
I've never seen Jareth so in character before. He retains his selfishness and arrogance, but it's still easy to see why Toby loves him.
Thank you so much for this beautiful story.
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After first sort of accidentally stumbling on your first fic (the one of Jack and Will's dad), I decided to explore your works. This caught my eye (NC-17), and I wasn't dissappointed, this is lovely! Your descriptions are terrific, and the story line is cool (even if it's short). It makes sense actually...after Jareth first lost Toby...and now he finally gets him back. Not to mention a long, blonde haired Toby is just fucking awesome period. You make the pairing really work. Very nicely done.

-Moonstar
person Keilana the Honanonanony
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was marvelous. The part with Jareth and Toby on the throne... simply marvelous. One of the worst things about slash is how poorly the characters are written sometimes, completely deviating from their original personalities. This story couldn't be any farther from this heinous act. It is a shining example of not only brilliant characterization, but you have also managed to include many of the more intriguing themes from the film, the most obvious example being stated in the very title of this captivating story. Wonderful, wonderful. Thank you for such a gift to the fabulous and limited world of Labyrinth slash.
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn... yeah that was hot and well written. You almost never find a story that is as well written and contains such a wonderful display of imagery. I can't wait for you to write more sometime. You are a wonderful writer.

Kittenn
person Esther
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've just seen my fantasies coming alive in this fic...I think your Jareth is the best i've ever read ^_^ Awesome job,Gobling Princess! ;)
person Wabbitsox
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOh that was so hot! Fab!
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the plot was lovely, the sex hot, the characters believable. In not so many words: Perfect. :D
person blisblop
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Boom.I liiike it.Now what else do you do?