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for Only Forever

by flameboi

person SailorAurora
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was great! please write more chapters.. I'd like to read some more :D
person colie
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
iee this is the first (and probably only ;.;) slash labyrinth story i've seen! it was really nicely , i , i must say. the ending was really good, it was almost not an ending (if you can understand that!). it left me thinking that there was more, but really didn't leave me wanting to beg for more. it was a damn good ending. i think that i will take a look and see if you have other stuff. oi, have you ever noticed that one of Jareth's eyes is brown and the other is blue? ^_~
person YaoiBoyDemonLover
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! THAT WAS AMAZING AND BEAUTI!!! !!!
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooohhh. I very much enjoyed this. And luckily I can picture every moment of it. Very nice. Very g Ori
person Zeda
schedule March 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD, my dream come true-! THIS IS LOVELY!
person Elfy
schedule February 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was a bit irritated by the idea at first (Labyrinth slash I mean), but your story was very nice ^_^ Liked it alot. Well written, nice character design and all. *applauses*
person CassandraTerra
schedule January 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you posted here (stupid ff.net) . I love you story. It's beautiful and very well wen! en! I hope you write more about Toby and Gareth .

Cassandra
person Taiorami
schedule January 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked this alot. IT was written very well and the imagery was beatiful, plus it wasn't just sex with no plot, which is always a plus. The ending was a tad bittersweet becase Toby seems destined to forget about his family, but at the same time he wouldn't have been happy otherwise. It's...lovely.