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for Naked On Your Chain

by flameboi

schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So cute, and not to mention hot!
The sex scene cuts off a bit abruptly I think. It may just be the perv in me, but i think that part flew by a bit fast. Other than that, this is fantastic! there aren't enough SilentBobxJay fics out there!
person Niiro _Yuuyake
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was too cute!
person schuldigliebe (not logged in)
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh the bondage was delicious. good job! *round of applause* there wasn't much plot but it was PWP so i guess i cant really complain, its what i was lookin for after all! lol. Keep up the good work.
person Herald Soucree
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The title caught my attention. :) *singing* "Velvet goldmine...naked on your chain..." Ah, good song. I'm a David Bowie fan, and I just got done reading "Jay & Silent Bob v.s. The Labyrinth", so this made me laugh...and other things. *wink* Mmmm, man sex...
person Nimil
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i must applaud you. i wasn't sure what i was getting into reading this story, as i am a big sb&j fan, and i was worried this was going to suck. but this story was great. i was amazed you kept them so in character though the whole thing! good on you
person WhiteDog
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!! That was so frickin' hot and funny!!! God you NAILED Jay!!! I'm gonna laugh at this for weeks to come,I can't believe I missed this category for this long!! (Mr Burns style)"Eeeeeeeexellent..."

White Dog
person shaolin
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Funny...yet extremely hot...GRRR...go
lunchbox!!!
person Rina76
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^____^ Loved this one too! Funny, sexy, sweet, horny! Adoring the diae. Ye. You're good, flameboi. Siiiiiigh, Jay is gorgeous....
schedule April 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! You managed to stay totally within character, which was a nice surprise. Nice work!