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for The Haunting Place

by Lktwoozee

person AnotherSparrowGroupY
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! You reviewed! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE you! I nearly asphyxiated when Jack started immitating Norri-pie. I think that the Commodore has to be the most adorable thing ever in creation. (Aside from Jack,of course ::Simpers at Jack to appease him:: ) Anyhow, I just really adore this story. I was checking daily to see if you had updated and I can't tell you how happym tom to hear your writer's block has fled!
Many kisses and hugs, and lots of worshipful bowing to you!
person Tracy
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is great, but is Maren going to change her mind about Jack anytime soon? I want to read some action!!!
person Mo
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is so cool. Honestly. I love the way you portray Jack and I love the way that for once, he's not getting his way when it comes to women!!! HAHAHAHA. By the way I loved the whole Barbossa possesion scene. Very creepy and realistic. Props. Please finish. You have no idea how many stories i've read where the author just you know doesnt finish right in the middle of the story. Please do no subject me to said agony because i absolutely adore your story!
person GylzGirl
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea Updates! I was so sick last month and have been so busy at work this month. Chapter 14 was a treat when I felt so bad. And Chapter 15 was a treat to find tonight!

Hugs!

Tricia :-)
person Gemini
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, another enthralling chapter! Images of a half naked Orlando Bloom will keep me warm this cold winter night.gratgrats to
your sister and I hope your writer's block is gone! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person iamwickedcool
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~
I missed this story. You are a really gifted writer. The Haunting Place never fails in making me laugh. Your use of perioalogalog is incredible and you have made sexual tension an art form. Please update soon!!!!
Grace
person aimless
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah!!!! My day is complete, another chapter is up. I knew there was a good reason to turn on my computer today. Thank you for my daily dose of Jack. I still absolutely love your fic and I say again that I have not seen a better characterization of Jack Sparrow in any other fic. Your original characters are very very well done too and completely believable. I cannot wait to see what happens to Maren and Jack next. The poor dear is so frustrated, I hope Maren takes pity on him soon. I know I sure would ;) Love the sexual tension you have created between them it is so delicious. Please keep the updates coming.

A devoted fan,
Amy
person Giova
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool! So glad to see this continued. i cant wait for more!
person Spaci
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!! UPDATE!!! Come on! Don't leave us hanging like this! Plus, I'm like Kristy now, yelling at "F "Fuck him! Fuck him!! Oh please, oh please fuck him!!!"
person Mo
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ack!!! you have no idea what this story has done to me. Usually i never review but christ! this story is so much better than any of the others ive read so far..... PLEASE FINISH IT!!!! or at least post another chapter. pleeeeeeease?????