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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to tell you how incredible i think your story is and how very much ive enjoyed reading it!!!!!!! Please continue!!!! i love all your charecters and your jack is so good and true to the "movie" jack!!! i think youve done an awesome job with the "pirate speech"!!!!!! i cant wait to read more!!!! oh and i just love kristy!!!! im going to have to use a few of her expletives in the future!!!!! take care and keep up the great work!!!!
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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! I love this story! I never thought I'd read Pirates fanfiction, but I was curious and after wading through enough W/J slash to
last me a lifetime, I stumbled upon your little tale and I was enthralled. Wonderful characters, good job creating Maren, she's
no Mary Sue, she's well crafted-and Kristy, too. Intriguing plot line, wonderful take on Jack...if they make a sequel of this movie,
they should use your fic as the script! Keep writing and I'll keep reading! With glee!
last me a lifetime, I stumbled upon your little tale and I was enthralled. Wonderful characters, good job creating Maren, she's
no Mary Sue, she's well crafted-and Kristy, too. Intriguing plot line, wonderful take on Jack...if they make a sequel of this movie,
they should use your fic as the script! Keep writing and I'll keep reading! With glee!
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ol' Jack :) Just when he thinks he's gettin' somewhere. Awesome as always!!! Can't wait for more!
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Guh!! I need more. Please! More fic. It's so hard to find PotC fic that keeps Jack in character and you are doing a fine job. Need more Jack.
And you're such a tease! The sexual tension is driving. me. crazy!! I'm loving every second of it, don't me me wrong, but at this rate, when they finally "do it", I'll spontaneously combust or something. And I'm begging for an NC-17 bit if porn here, baby. Maren's and Jack's "encounters" so far have been positively lickable (what about Jack isn't?) so I know you have an NC-17 chapter in you. C'mon. You know you want to. I know I want you to. ;)
And you're such a tease! The sexual tension is driving. me. crazy!! I'm loving every second of it, don't me me wrong, but at this rate, when they finally "do it", I'll spontaneously combust or something. And I'm begging for an NC-17 bit if porn here, baby. Maren's and Jack's "encounters" so far have been positively lickable (what about Jack isn't?) so I know you have an NC-17 chapter in you. C'mon. You know you want to. I know I want you to. ;)
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lots of fun as usual. This is definitly becoming my favourite story on here!
Great desriptive stuff!
Onwards to the next delicious chapter.
Great desriptive stuff!
Onwards to the next delicious chapter.
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! Three chapters at once! What riches! The possession by Barbossa was frighteningly well done. The last scene, when skeletal Jack is crawling over Maren, alternated so well between horrifying and hysterical, I wasn't sure whether to laugh or scream. I am enjoying this so much.
BTW, on a personal note, I find it interesting that you are a newspaper writer. Before I had my children, I wrote for newspapers for ten years, so I know the job well. I also love to write FF, just haven't worked up the 'oomph' to 'share' it yet.
BTW, on a personal note, I find it interesting that you are a newspaper writer. Before I had my children, I wrote for newspapers for ten years, so I know the job well. I also love to write FF, just haven't worked up the 'oomph' to 'share' it yet.
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yabbadabbadoo, three new chapters at once! You just saved my day, luv!
Still love your story, still torn between laughter, eagerness, anxiety, sensuality,... all at once. Don't know what else to say - and by the way, I got a Captain here in my bed to cuddle (thanks to you!), so if you'll excuse me...? ;)
Thanks a lot - can't wait to read more,
Arella.
Still love your story, still torn between laughter, eagerness, anxiety, sensuality,... all at once. Don't know what else to say - and by the way, I got a Captain here in my bed to cuddle (thanks to you!), so if you'll excuse me...? ;)
Thanks a lot - can't wait to read more,
Arella.
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated at last! I've been following this story since you started posting it and it's one of my favorites, I just never got around to leaving you a review and telling you so. Maren and Kristy are both very well done OCs, and I love the whole mystical aspect. Great story, and update soon!
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ya, baby Ya~ this is by far the best fanfiction I have EVER read!!!! You got it going girl~ please dont make us wait for the next chapters I will not be able to control myself if you do!!!!!
P.S.
Jack should definitly have a tattoo for his mother Because even pirates" are loved by their mommies and dads" as well as the fact that Johnny has one for his mother Betty Sue.
Hope to be reading you real soon~ (no pun intended)
P.S.
Jack should definitly have a tattoo for his mother Because even pirates" are loved by their mommies and dads" as well as the fact that Johnny has one for his mother Betty Sue.
Hope to be reading you real soon~ (no pun intended)
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An absolute masterpiece. And please, don't leave it forever to update. I'm in the midst of moving and have no time for my own fics but I can still grab five mintues for a quick 'internet fix' and seeing your story upd wid will keep me sane!
I'm going to stay connected till the last possible second before my husband rips the keyboard from my fingers and packes the computer too.... sobs... please... don't desert me! I need the 'maren fix' too.
I'm going to stay connected till the last possible second before my husband rips the keyboard from my fingers and packes the computer too.... sobs... please... don't desert me! I need the 'maren fix' too.