rate_review Reviews

I am enjoying this story so much! It is very textured and colorful, with great characterizations. I would love to know your profession, as I assume that you write professionally. Please! continue to update!

Maren's not the only damn tease :) Though to be fair you did say chapter 11 and not them but D'Oh! Can't wait for more!

Wonderful story cant wait for more!!!!! Your my first review~can I have a treat?

Here I was all excited with a two chapter update, and another chapter gets loaded up while I'm reading part 6! Whoo!!! I must say, Maren has far more self-control than I would :) This story is just awesome! I love all the characters! Especially Kristy... though I think if she'd go off for a couple hours, Maren might give in to our lovely Cap'n's charms

Keep writing! I can't wait for more!

Tricia

hey citadel,

wow, more great chapters. i just loved the whole jack and maren opium party. it was so funny. poor jack. you so have to write more. this story is amazing.

oh and thank u for caticating those chas tos to me. it was very sweet of you to do that amd it made me happy. oh and ill try not to be to naughty in jacks cabin..........but no promises. lol

well keep up the excellent work.

sarah xxx

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapters of your story. Love your depiction of Capt. Jack- in character, crazy as a fox, sexy as hell. I liked the scene with the crew when he first comes aboard the Pearl- I always thought his stoner act was a mask designed to throw off his enemies. You show Jack's reckless streak and how he calculates just what he can get away with. Maren is a great foil for Jack- she is feisty and brings her own gift to the adventure. It would be fun to see her "toy" a little more with Jack. (love the chocolate scene). Your dialogue is good and believable for the time frame. Kristy is lots of fun too. Who can resist a real bad boy who can be a real good man? Not me.

I love it! Great OC and Jack is awesome and in character. Oh I hope there's more soon! Write write write!!!

hey I love your story! Jack is so in character, please continue you're doing such a great job

I love your OC, she's so fiesty. This idea definately shows promise, I can'it tit to see where it goes.

Wow, it's a good idea. Love it so far.
Please keep going.