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Woo-flippin'-hoo! I wondered where you had got to. Why were you deleted, fer gawd's sake?

A wonderful chapter to read at 9.30am on a Sunday morning - you are a veritable genuis!

Yay! Found you! About bloody time - and only thanks to Ani kicking me in the right direction!

You know my response - as ever... need more!

I'm addicted to this!

Ta!

YAY!!!! I think I read it four times... Man I missed you!

Hurray! I am sooo happy to hear from you again! What a great chappie! Why anyone would delete your wonderful story is beyond me! Update as soon as possible, dearie. As always I will be anxiously awaiting more adventures with Jack and Maren. Happy writing from your happy reader! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K :)

ROTFLMAO!! Loved the gambling and cheating and petting at the table. Great writing! More soon please.

are you still gonna continue this story

Holy Jesus.

Just read this in about five hours straight and am STILL stuck to my chair like limpet (take that how you will).
1) You have an OC that I actually like, with an in depth character that is completely believable. The addition of her ghost is something I've actually not come across in any other fanfic and is just what it needs. A way to give several different viewpoints on the same action. That's not doing it justice, but you get the general idea.
2) Jack is wonderful. Superb. BELIEVABLE. In character, and beautifully described. Thanks for not making him perfect, or a complete simpering eunuch.
3) I have a hard time not laughing out loud most of the time - my family might think it a little strange, considering I'm supposed to be revising.
4) Perfectly fluently written - one of those rare fanfics where you don't even notice the words on the page because it's so vivid.
5) Someone who can spell and knows what grammar is! Hallelujah!

Basically (trying to to gush here) am slightly incoherent due to the awe-inspiring vision of Jack naked. But it is a truly inspired fanfic, and I will give you my undying devotion if you write more. And quickly. It's already being distributed around my like-minded friends

Izzy

Just reread your whole story - and I still love, no, adore it!
Will you go on - and when?
Hoping & keepin' my fingers crossed that you'll make it happen, preferrably sometime soon... ;)

WooHoo! What a fun and sexy story! Gotta love Cap'n Jack. Hope you will continue to entertain us with more soon.

more please!!!