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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Hell!!! Your story was not where I usually read it and I panicked! Thank God I found you. Do you know why you're not there any more? Anyway, great chapters! Jail scene with ghosts was excellent and please tell me that strip poker was invented back then! Also, having touched on how Jack and Maren feel about each other. it would be interesting to see how Maren would react if Jack showed his attentions to another woman. Keep up the great writing!
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, MORE!!!
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i dont think i could love this story any more than i do.
thats all i have to say!
toodles!
thats all i have to say!
toodles!
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Updates!!!! I have been checking religiously and now I have been rewarded! :) Can't wait for more!
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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Being as the 'other place' went down before I could review, you've got it here instead! I love it when Jack is telling a story - he can certainly tell me a bedtime story any day of the week. The part in the prison really gave me the creeps - well done!
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god not cards!!!!! Not a bad job on the birth control. Where did you get the idea?? Are you sure we can't work on a joined story??? You know you want to!!! Update soon my friend! Another good chapter......*bows*
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Silphium? Man, makes ya wonder, you know? Jesus, curiosity eats my brain. I want a silphium plant. ...c_c Er.
Anyway, YOU FINALLY CONTINUED! OMFG THANK YOU!
Anyway, YOU FINALLY CONTINUED! OMFG THANK YOU!
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see that this story is being updated again. :-)
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!!! Yay!! You're back! I missed you! And 50 chapters sounds just fine to me! I don't really want the story of Jack and Maren to ever end! That last seen was hot and cute at the same time!
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God another fabulous chapter!!! I can't believe you waited so long to update. Course I can't say too much, I haven't updated in a while. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! Update soon! BTW Your chapters are bloody hilarious!
-Chelsey-
-Chelsey-