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for The Haunting Place

by Lktwoozee

person Lady V
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful! I truljoyejoyed this story. ^^v Thank you for writing and please keep a' goin'!
person Gem-chan
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoAn uAn update! Me love you long time! If watg CMg CMT gets your muse on, then do it, do it until you become retarded. I love this story!
person Spaci
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! You updated! And I watched that video (at least the first half before my computer messed up... grrr!) and it was fucking hillarious! I had to cover my mouth to stop from makino muo much noise! And I enjoyed the new chapter too! I love how you made the "Black Pearl" have a personality; that's a hard thing to pull off but you did it! Good job! I hope this new muse stays with you for a long time so we get more chapters soon!
Spaci
person Chelsey
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Citadel my love, that was fabulous!!!!! I cannot wait until you write your next chapter! You have some of the best humor in your stories. Unfortunatly my last chapter was more plot than anything. It had a little funny. Speaking of which, have you read it yet? And when are we going to cowrite a story? You know you want to!!!
Anywho Great chapter! I hope I don't steal any ideas (not to worry you have my word as a pirate) This chapter did give me some fresh ideas though. Keep up the good work! And email me if you get stuck by writers block again. Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful Soul of a Pirate, Heart of an Artist.
Tha That video was fucking hilarious!
person Jamie
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was just rereading parts of this fic, and I have to tell you -- it's amazing! I cannot wait for an update!

Jamie :)
person cantgetarush
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks
person Blue Magic
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello Citadel. I think hour story is fabulous. You\got got some of the most creative original characters and Im particulary taken with Chrissy. I wonder what would be the 17th century equivalent to having a mouth like a truck driver. Fabulously creative. Wish I'd read it earlier so I could have gotten in on the tatto contest....
person Chelsey
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Citadel,
*bows* Isooosoooo not worthy! I just can't get enough of your story! It's inspired me even more than before. Although my main character is gonna get a tattoo in chapter 4 it will be nothing as good as your last chapter! I'm not stealing the idea from you I swear on my immortal pirate soul. Isa and Jack are gonna start to heat up, although it's not going to work in Jack's favor for once. Isa's gonna be a bit of a tease just like me and Lauren (Isa's model). Please read my chapter 3 and review!!!! I'm dying to know what you think! GAAAAAAAAA!!!!! You need to write more! update or I will be forced to flogg you (and not in the good way). I love this story! And you're not alone I can't figure out where my story's going either so we're on the same ship! Anyway stay tuned to my chapter 4: Caribbean Days; Caribbean Nights. Love your story! Please update soon! Oh and if you have any ideas for the tattoo Isabelle should get please let me know!

-Chelsey-
person Spaci
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best chapters ever!! A naked Jack and his tattoos!! Ah, man! I'm going to be thinking about that for awhile now! Damn, I just want to run my ton- ok I'll stop... no one wants to hear abotu that... *cough* Anywho! I love the story, love the characters, love YOU! Up soo soon!
Spaci
person Melantha
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woooooo! *applause* Very nice. Good mix of dialogue and action. Very IC. Very nice everything, natural. ^_^

*salute*

~Melantha