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for Close Your Eyes

by SheraCrawler

person Jackie
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the movie. Interesting take on this scene.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've watched that movie at least thirty times before, and not once have I thought about what happened in that car.

Huh.

Well, this fills in any curiosity I may have had someday about it. xD

Very nice job, M'Lady (or Lord...). Very nice job.
person Vee
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was very well done, I could just feel everything that went on and it may have probably went exactly like that. I loved LAAH, Sam just had so much anger and was getting himself into really bad situations. Lucky that cop car pulled up. Great fic.
person lexi
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved life as a house and this so follows everything in that scene but includes alot more. very very descriptive...i really like it. and hayden...man is he hot.
person Sky
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude i saw the movie,you did an excellant job,i always kinda wanted to know what it was for him to be in the car.

Well done!
person Caz
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this too - but it was waaaaaaay too short. Would have liked to see you explore his feelings after the event. Pity about the typing errors. Looks like a glitch rather than spelling errors. Good effort though. I liked that you didn't make it sordid.
person Goddessalien
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, I liked it, but you might want to check the spelling.

person the_devil
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(autoerotic asphyxiation, drugs, Marilyn Manson, y'know the fun stuff) Wow some one of my own heart.

Thank you for the absolutly amazing read, it touched me in a way, where most other stories fail. It was so in depth and meaningful, I just keep reading it over and over agian.

Agian thank you for the amazing read
person emouse
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was really good and well written. you captured sam's shame at what he was doing...knowing that he had taken things too far.
just one small criticism...if you look closely to what is going on in the car (the man's head that was once visible before can't be seen, and sam's eyes are
fixated on his own lap) it's clear that the guy (asshole neighbor) is just sucking him off.
person Jessi
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was so totally awesome. Seriously, it's now taking it's rightful place in my top ten favorite fanfics of all time. Keep up the incredible work!