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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read this many many many many times and think it is just an excellent piece of writing. I have read a prequel to this story somewhere, by another author I think, that explains Jack's origins as a 'youngling' sea creature and how he becomes humanized. Do you know the story I mean? What the heck is the name of it? Because I have lost track of it and cannot remember the name and I love to read the two stories together.
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October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very cool and scary. We always knew that Jack wasn't quite what he seemed, didn't we?
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
@_@...................... Man..... that is good. Not conventional at all. I love it, because that's really how Jack is, you don't really know where he came from.
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to thank you for the reviews on this piece of extreme strangeness. I know it was a weird, mutant bunny bit it hang bng black fur and dangly things bed ied into it and then it bit me. Hard.
Seriously, I truly appreciate anyone taking the time to let me know what they think. Thanks to those of you who enjoyed it and yes, I'm sure I'll be back with more oddities, depending on which of my insane bunny zoo grows up first.
Again :::sweeping hat off in a low bow::: my humble thanks
Briony
Seriously, I truly appreciate anyone taking the time to let me know what they think. Thanks to those of you who enjoyed it and yes, I'm sure I'll be back with more oddities, depending on which of my insane bunny zoo grows up first.
Again :::sweeping hat off in a low bow::: my humble thanks
Briony
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...
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September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like the way you write, it flows, very cool story, eerie, pretty.
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September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wellllllll i can way one thing about this...ITS *VERY* CONFUNSING! What about sparrow? Sharks teeth? claws? I soooooo confused!
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September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woah, wicked cool tale!!! I could see it, the subtle changes happening to Jack, the roar of sgaingainst the sky, the twisting of hair and shark-black eyes. Too cool, i read it before work AND after work. any chance of more tales from you??