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for The Price of Rum

by lostmarbles

person Jags
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~sniff, sniff~ this always happens! ~sniff~ even in real life...i don't cry until the funeral...~sniff~
It was excellent. Needs some fine editing but otherwise very good.
....~sniff~
person Ennis and Jack Del Mar
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLLY SHIT IN HELL!!! THATS DIRTIER THEN A HOG IN A MUD PUDDLE!!! And i knows nutin about them angles of ships and all that But yous one crazy sonabitch! What ya been watchin ta get yer ideas anyway? I sure like the story but dang if don't scare me some.

person Catie
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story rocked. Write more stories soon. You are so damn good.
person Patroclus
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

How are you. Well I read The Price Of Rum. I loved it. It was fnnuy. I love humor. It had pain and depression. I liked that alot. It had death. I cried and told my friend Maira to read it. She cried. But that is only because she loves loves Orlando Bloom and Johny Depp. But who can blaim her. But if Johny or Orlando go missing I think we will have to check her have to check her basement for the poor guys. If you are inlove with Bloom like my freaky friend you should go see the movie that is coming out. Troy. My friend almost had an orgasm when she heard that Bloom and Pitt are going to be together in tunics and sweaty and soooo much skin. Ok now I am becoming a freak. I realy, realy, truely hope you write more. I will love to read it. If it is about Bloom or Depp my friend will love to read it too. Can't wait. Love Love Love.
Patroclus.
person lovingelves
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really luv the story! So wicked *grin*
person Sarryn
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice resolution.
person kate
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a wonderful story i enjoyed immencely!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person angel
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
absolutley fantastic writing mate!! took me forever to read but it warth rth it! are you going to do a short epiloge lol you nearly made me cry? have you anymore POTC slash id love to read them if there as good as this one! xx
person Rubyservantofeli
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! you can't end it like that it's illegal to not have happy endings!
You big meanie *crys eyes out*....if you didn'twrite so well I'd hate you *sniffles*
I loved this fic and a bad ending is just mean!
*whimpers*....nice epiloge, nice, please....

Ruby
person Lisa
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dear goddess, that was sad. very, very sad. but it really hadhapphappen, after all they've been through. i guess it's sweet that they went together after all. i want you to know that i think this is an AWESOME story! i love it so very much...please update with that promised happy epilogue. SOON!!!