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for The Price of Rum

by lostmarbles

person Violet Bunny
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!!!! You big @#$%#$% #$%# ^%^& HOW COULD YOU?!!!! That was so freakin' sad. I didn't actually expect them to just die, after being put through so much torture ;_; You better make up for it. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Please oh please update soon. Oh, and forgive the outburst earlier, I just love Jack and Will so much ^_^ Anyway, this story is really beautiful. I specially loved the parts where Jack tortured Barbossa's crew. Good job. Now get on with it, and put up the next chapter, please.
person Vana
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok you are SO being archived in APTA (Angst Pain TortTorture Association)!! Contact me when you want it...I'm working hard on the site and it wie upe up as soon as possible...and seeing as we have an apparent duel love for non-happy endings...MAN this will be good.


Sorry, am all excited and sad at the same time coz the fic is now done...I mean...WOW!! I have been following this thing for ages and I can NOT believe it's actually over...you MUST write for of this beautiful piece of fictional writing...it's AMAZING!!! Gruesome, but amazing. Just a request though...don't make the epilogue terribly short. I really would love to see the rest of the crew's veiw on the whole event (without TOO much mush..please) and all.

Jeez I'm all shaking here coz it was so long between updates and all I nearly thought I had lost the fic forever...GAH!!


Anyway, hope to see you in my archive (when the bloody thing is done...I really need some help with it I do coz it's going to be massive) soon.


BE WELL AND ANGST AND PAIN RULES!!!


~Vana E the Sadist~
person soulesstwilighld;¨ld
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*SOB* OMG you didn't! *c hys hysterically* ohhhhh so sad! i really had tears in my eyes as i read this! you are so god damn good at this!
person Desertrain
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! NONONO!! ::cries:: ::goes into deep denial:: You're just kidding about the 'the end' part, right? RIGHT? ::cried yet some more:: Wow. It was sweet - disturbing, but sweet - the way they died, but NONONONONO!!!!!!!!! Wah! ::still crying:: Seriou tho though, you did make me tear up, and my roomate thought it was nuts. She doesn't do the whole slash thing. But it was brilliant, in spite of my denial about the whole death thing. Are you maybe going to write a sequel, or an epilogue about them meeting in Summerland, or heaven, or whatever you want to call it? I think that would give the story a great bit of closure. Even though I did love this, I felt it wasn't quite finished in some way. That might be iAnywAnyway, as I've said before, I honestly love this story, and I hope you write a good bit more that I will get to happily read and cry throu! :! :s tos to watch Pirates again, still crying::

~Desertrain
person Cashiel
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.
I'm not really sure how I feel about this.
I absolutely love this story, and it being over is a little strange.
But yes, the story was amazing from beginning to end. Thank you.
person Mei Leng
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. *gapes at you* Certainly wasn't expecting that! Can't say I'm disappointed though. Go out with a bang and all that! WEll done, thanks for writing it. ^.^
person FainpatheElanesse
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! so so so so good! *snuggles Lydia* poor Jack, poor Will! i just wanna snuggle them both! how could you kill them?! lol nah, great ending to the story - i was wiping away a tear or two myself! awwwwwwww! keep up the good work - update wolf in sheep's clothing please! i need more will/jack! (jill? wack? hmmm....might have to work on that one....:P)
person PJ
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will you be continuing this story it is very good. Please don't just leave it there!!! Please please continue
person Desertrain
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm sure you're gonna eventually ask me to stop reviewing, or get incredibly annoyed, or something, but I'll take my chances.

Was reading again. Yes, AGAIN. But thise, re, read the A/N's a little more carefully and caught a reference....a VOLTAIRE reference....and all I can say is,

YOU REALLY ROCK NOW!

Hee. Caught him at a science fiction convention last year, and now my best friend and I are totally smitten. Hot guy, sings beautifully. As I've said before to others, though, he can get a little strange on the Convention hotel concourse at 1 or 2 in the morning...but then, so does everyone. Look at me, case in point. I promise I'm not near as strange as I sound when it's before 3 am...Anyhow, 'When You're Evil' is my best friends favorite song, mine's 'Graveside Picnic'. Just can't beat Annabel Lee, especially not when sung by Voltaire...

Okay. Before you boot me off your story...DeseDesertrain
person Emily
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have fallen in love with all your writing! You have converted me into the wonderful world of dark/angst fiction. Cannot wait for the next installment, Jack has a lot of torture to inflict on Barbossa! Ahhhh that friggin bastard I hate him but I love the story! Keep it up Lydia!
Love Emily
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