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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.o
Wow.
I think I love you. . .Well, I just took a couple of hours to read through this story all at one go, and just let me say that in spite of rape, non-con, and murder...I LOVE IT!!!! I think my favorite nasty Pirate death was where the one was choked on his own penis...definately a nice one, I applaud your imagination there. I also love your AnaMaria, and want to cuddle a fragile Will, and want to slap an occassionally obtuse Jack--but then he goes all lovey on Will and I forgive him. I hope you update soon, I'm adding you to my favorites list on my bio at fanfiction.net...I think I can do that...is it okay with you? I certainly hope so.
Anyway, letting out the inner five year old: MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!! :) Thanks ever so, I'll be checking soon for an update!!!!!
~Desertrain (on fanfiction.net, which is down at the moment, as usual, so I can't put in my customary link, and its 4 am and I'm babbling, so I'll go and dream of pirates now while muttering wildly at having found of thf the best damned stories on this site...wow again...@.@...)
Wow.
I think I love you. . .Well, I just took a couple of hours to read through this story all at one go, and just let me say that in spite of rape, non-con, and murder...I LOVE IT!!!! I think my favorite nasty Pirate death was where the one was choked on his own penis...definately a nice one, I applaud your imagination there. I also love your AnaMaria, and want to cuddle a fragile Will, and want to slap an occassionally obtuse Jack--but then he goes all lovey on Will and I forgive him. I hope you update soon, I'm adding you to my favorites list on my bio at fanfiction.net...I think I can do that...is it okay with you? I certainly hope so.
Anyway, letting out the inner five year old: MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!! :) Thanks ever so, I'll be checking soon for an update!!!!!
~Desertrain (on fanfiction.net, which is down at the moment, as usual, so I can't put in my customary link, and its 4 am and I'm babbling, so I'll go and dream of pirates now while muttering wildly at having found of thf the best damned stories on this site...wow again...@.@...)
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wait! I forgot some things! Damned being so late..err...early...whatever.
I lovd the pig reference at the end. Brilliace! And the whole thing about the hair tie being Will's most treasured possession simply becuase Jack gave t to him...::sob::! And the whole dancing scene! I was glad that Will was healed up well enough to have some fun. Lillie is the cutest child ever in Fanfiction, and i loved the way she went to tell Jak about Will--te whole "Mommy said it was okay if someone was going to get hurt". That's just what my mother told me when I was younger. I was glad that Will killed Craig, he was really starting to get on my nerves--it's wonderful when a character is written so well that they have you muttering at your computer screen! Anf...and...and...I'm not believing you 't h't have more reviews! Oh, and I was the first one for 2004, go me...and...and...and...wow, so much to say, but I think you have the idea, right?
I hope you can really tell how much I love this story. I wish I could write half as well.
Wow. I need sleep.
UPDATE!!!
~Desertr(who(who by now has probably become incrly aly annoying and will leave you alone lest you take out an online restraining order, which would just make me cry because I couldn't read anymore of the story...::cries:: ::falls over asleep in chair::)
I lovd the pig reference at the end. Brilliace! And the whole thing about the hair tie being Will's most treasured possession simply becuase Jack gave t to him...::sob::! And the whole dancing scene! I was glad that Will was healed up well enough to have some fun. Lillie is the cutest child ever in Fanfiction, and i loved the way she went to tell Jak about Will--te whole "Mommy said it was okay if someone was going to get hurt". That's just what my mother told me when I was younger. I was glad that Will killed Craig, he was really starting to get on my nerves--it's wonderful when a character is written so well that they have you muttering at your computer screen! Anf...and...and...I'm not believing you 't h't have more reviews! Oh, and I was the first one for 2004, go me...and...and...and...wow, so much to say, but I think you have the idea, right?
I hope you can really tell how much I love this story. I wish I could write half as well.
Wow. I need sleep.
UPDATE!!!
~Desertr(who(who by now has probably become incrly aly annoying and will leave you alone lest you take out an online restraining order, which would just make me cry because I couldn't read anymore of the story...::cries:: ::falls over asleep in chair::)
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December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God you like to make Will suffer dontcha!
Update soon!
Update soon!
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December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing fic! There were only a few techical errors, but the story is great!
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story needs more chapters keep up the great work
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I have been reading this story for the past couple days now and i have to say that it is pretty good. I try to say just one chapter a day because i have so much else to do, but i never seem to just stop at one. As it is i made it through the whole thing in 3 days. I just wanted to say great story, keep up the good work! and please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Pretty pretty please!
I have been reading this story for the past couple days now and i have to say that it is pretty good. I try to say just one chapter a day because i have so much else to do, but i never seem to just stop at one. As it is i made it through the whole thing in 3 days. I just wanted to say great story, keep up the good work! and please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Pretty pretty please!
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GOOD! WONDERFUL IN FACT! MORE PLEASE!
And on another note, about tigs.igs.... ewwwwwwwwwwwww
And on another note, about tigs.igs.... ewwwwwwwwwwwww
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving your story more and more with every chapter.
The Hannibal thing got me laughing out loud, especially before I found out if that was, indeed, where you got it from. I don't know, but for some reason I didn't think it completely impossible that you would've made it up without the help of Thomas Harris... *g*
The Hannibal thing got me laughing out loud, especially before I found out if that was, indeed, where you got it from. I don't know, but for some reason I didn't think it completely impossible that you would've made it up without the help of Thomas Harris... *g*
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very interesting twist....i didn't see Will killing someone. kinda wish he was with jack and not barbossa. very well written and as always, i'm hooked! as it is the holidays, please update soon!!! i'm dying to see how things work, and for jack and will to be really together. please update as soon as you possibly can!
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you. must. update. now. or. face. my. poison. do you know how much suspense you're putting on me? oh and i'm glad i made you laugh.;D