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December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!! i love this fic, it's been so well developed, and it's incredibly sweet...i really hope you post again soon. don't make Will be get too traumatized, though...the couple is too cute to let them fall apart. like i said, great job with this piece. POST SOON!!
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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you're horrible. how could you leave it like this?? and after all Will's gone through, now you're doing this to him? how do you live with yourself??? write more soon cause i love it;)!!!!!!
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story needs more chapters and please update soon
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wonderful...i just now got around to reading this fic, and i love it!! the development is fantastic, better than most i've seen. and the story is sooooo sweet and so tragic...i want them to be happy again. VERY happy! i think you're doing a great job dear; PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi Lydia! Nice chapter! I loved to see them dancing,it was so cute... :) But how could you end like that??? Poor Will,he's again on Barbossa's hands! Hope Jack come and rescue bef before it's too late! Now that Will was almost healed...I hate this Craig! He's so poisonous!! It was so sad when he ripped Will's sash. :( Come on Jack,find him!!!! Thanks for updating and keep it going! ;)
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're going to leave us hanging with that?! Poor Will! I'd like to get my hands on Craig and sodomize him with a beer bottle, then wring his bloody neck.
I commend you, by the way, on your writing ability. You have managed to weave your tale and enthrall your reader. Can't wait to see more!
I commend you, by the way, on your writing ability. You have managed to weave your tale and enthrall your reader. Can't wait to see more!
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH NO NOT GOOD!!!!!! NOT GOOD!!!!!!
HOW can you end it there????? That just isn't cool!!! Poor Will he must be so scared. You have to make Lille go and tell Jack that the bad man took Will away!!!! Before anything happens to Will. STUPID STUPID STUPID Craig hurting Will just because he is in a jealous rage. But wait I thought you said that he was now attracted to Will as well? How does that work if he is taking Will back to Barbossa? Oh well Please please please try to post the next chapter soon. I fear that I will no longer have a life, until you do as I will always be online checking to see if you have posted more. The suspence is killing me and I just finished reading it...imagine what is going to become of me in a few hours!!!! Excellent Chapter as always Had me going there for a min. With the Craig and Will sex I was like what the F***? But glad to see it was just a dream, a twisted dream on Craigs part. Anyways post more soon!!!!!
Hope your life goes a little smoother too! Have a good one!
:) Jack4Turner
HOW can you end it there????? That just isn't cool!!! Poor Will he must be so scared. You have to make Lille go and tell Jack that the bad man took Will away!!!! Before anything happens to Will. STUPID STUPID STUPID Craig hurting Will just because he is in a jealous rage. But wait I thought you said that he was now attracted to Will as well? How does that work if he is taking Will back to Barbossa? Oh well Please please please try to post the next chapter soon. I fear that I will no longer have a life, until you do as I will always be online checking to see if you have posted more. The suspence is killing me and I just finished reading it...imagine what is going to become of me in a few hours!!!! Excellent Chapter as always Had me going there for a min. With the Craig and Will sex I was like what the F***? But glad to see it was just a dream, a twisted dream on Craigs part. Anyways post more soon!!!!!
Hope your life goes a little smoother too! Have a good one!
:) Jack4Turner
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November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please please write more! I NEED more! I'm begging you!
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November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't be upset!!!!!
Just wanted to let yoow tow that I just reread the whole story and I have to say that is definitly one of the best pieces of Pirates of the Carib fic fiction that I have ever read. Your writing style is so smooth and very easy to follow. I absolutly love the way that you portray the characters you show such love between the characters; Jack and Will. I must say that I'm hooked on your story and that I look every day to see if it has been updated. Don't get discuraged, you are very talented, you said some postings back that you where 20? Well I must tell you thats not fair as I'm 21 and I can't write nearly as well as I think you can. Please continue with your story....
Can't wait to read more....post more soon!!!!
:)
Just wanted to let yoow tow that I just reread the whole story and I have to say that is definitly one of the best pieces of Pirates of the Carib fic fiction that I have ever read. Your writing style is so smooth and very easy to follow. I absolutly love the way that you portray the characters you show such love between the characters; Jack and Will. I must say that I'm hooked on your story and that I look every day to see if it has been updated. Don't get discuraged, you are very talented, you said some postings back that you where 20? Well I must tell you thats not fair as I'm 21 and I can't write nearly as well as I think you can. Please continue with your story....
Can't wait to read more....post more soon!!!!
:)
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November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweetie! I didn't know you wanted feedback this much. Well,you know I love this fic but I thought I'd say it to ye again since you want feedback so much. I love this fic!!! I really do. I love the way Jack and Will are so caring with one another!! Please post more soon! I'm sure lots of people love this fic and want to read more from you! :)
Cheers,Mariana
Cheers,Mariana