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Hey don't cry i think that this rocks i love the will is finally needing jack again i hope that the next chaptewrs are at your best good luck

Your story is wonderful. That is if you can call a violent story about rape wonderful. (LOL) The flow is good. You have woven the characters together well and made them so real. There are very few if any mistakes (this is a real pet peeve of mine, it's the evil English major in me coming out.) You should keep it up. The others that you have posted here are as good, but this is my favorite. Good job.

Well, you wanted some reviews! Im crap at them but I will just say that this is the best POTC story ive read on here, and im not just saying that! Dont get me wrong, i love the sex (oh the shame) but the way Jack and Will are so in love is gorgeous - im a diehard romantic at heart! so pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post some more up, bcoz i cant wait to read it! And rest assured that people love this story - you said yourself you've had over 1000 hits! people just forget to review, like i have until now!

luv Katy xxx

WOOOHOOO!!!!!

I just love the story...I've read all 10 chapters over and over again and now was finally able to read the next two. Wow I love this story. Though I'm surprised that Ana didn't do some more drastic messers to Craig. It is my personal oppinion that Will should tell Jack that there was no slave and that Craig attacked him. Then you could have Jack keel haul the monster, gutting him and leave him for the sharks. Not that I don't liraigraig but he did go after Jack's Will. And it would be a just punishment. Savvy?

Well Can't wait for the rest of the story.
Keep up the excellent work! :)

I love this story it's so sweet and in chapter 10 I was crying my eyes out it was so sad but cute and really good at the same time please continue. Thanks.

I love this story, really I do! Is Jack gonna sit up and take notice of what's goingpretpretty soon? I'm waiting for it!

Actually, in a way, I'm not. I'd almost prefer Will finds out everything, including the Craig issue and what was done to the dead prisoners. Angst, angst, angst!! Woohoo!!!

So, now that I reviewed, could you put another chapter up? Like NOW!? I have an exam in two hours which I'm going to fail miserably and I could really use the pick-me-up.

PLEASE!?!?!?

I love the lovey dovey stuff like when they kiss each other tenderly or hold each other and of couse I like the sex sene to. I also like all the emotional trauma what am I saying I love the story period it has a good plot to it. And pleases update soon again. Thanks

Glad to see another chapter up so soon! Chapter 13 was great I just loved the part with Craig and Will and then Ana finding them. Poor Will, didn't know how close he was to real harm....thank goodness Ana came along when she did. Now if only Jack would realize what Craig is up too. I still think that he should be keel hauled and left for the sharks. Update soon...Can't wait to read more Jack and Will.

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i like this story it shows all side of Jack and Will and the crew please finish it thanks

Hey, you can't just leave us hanging like that!! I need to know what Barbossa will do to poor poor Will!! And that site you directed us to doesn't have the fic up. *pouts*
Usually not fond of AU, but this one was great!! pleeeeeease continue!!!!