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for Broken Wings

by KCbakeneko

schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. It's nice to see something on here once in a while that isn't filled to the brim with sex or violence. This was beautifully written and nicely thought out. I must admit I was sad to see you haven't done any others for Labyrinth. But anyways, amazing job ^^
person GemKat5
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story, I enjoyed reading it very much.
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story was truly wonderful. Not horribly long, but the perfect length. Tons of adventure, a horrible villain, Sarah and Jareth working together- Sarah being brave, capable and fair to Jareth- all the "little" things that make me fall totally in love with a story. I wish this site allowed for 'favorite'd storys and authors' - you'd definitely be on the list. Do you write at ff.net as well perchance? Thank you for this wonderful story, I really enjoyed it!!!
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person HerEyesCanPenetrate
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is it really touched my heart. The end brought tears. The emotion was so genuine, I was actually jealous of the characters. Keep writing! And Thank You. (ps. R&R my stuff too!)
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my god. That was absolutely beautiful. Thank you so much for posting it.
person unvoicedsigner
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_Owow that was.....................GREAT I LOVED IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
person ~sam~
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
holy crap. that was good. like really super good. O.O now all it needs is a little lemon added onto the end. ~_^

this was a very good fanfic. Sarah and Jareth were both in character, and Arin was a very interesting addition. She could have had more depth... but i'm not going to complain about this fic. my favorite scene has to be the one with the Sphinx and Gloom Dragon. so fun!

and i'm serious about that lemon. ... and what was that about Jareth being Sarah's slave? ::wiggles eyebrows::
~sam~
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omfg awesom... extremely awesom
person Sailor Aurora
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so good. :)
And you know something? I could actually see Jareth having siblings like that... quite the disfunticonal family.