rate_review Reviews

I liked the story until I got to the end. You subtly built up sexual tention between them but there was no pay off leaving me feeling a little cheated once I got to the end. I was half expecting them to be dragging each other into bed. But then that's how my smutty mind works. I was really looking forward to Jareth and Sarah and sweaty satin sheets. I don't know if you've been burned by another fic site like I have, but from what I can see the is really PG-13 material. Over all you did a good job putting it together. I look to see more from your pen in the future.
Ithilin

Wow,.. this is totally quality stuff! I've read thousands of fanfics,.. but,.. you're truly first rate! You are an original, totally unbelievably good writer. I'll be glad to get to know you & yr work better... =D P.S. Great grammar & spelling too.

Excellent! This is defineately an excellent story. I enjoyed it immencely. It totally made my day! ^_~

First of all, Melana Draconis - had this fic not been here I wouldn't have read it. Not everything HAS to be hardcore and every once in awhile it's nice to see something here that ISN'T smut. Just every once in awhile. So get off your high smut horse, thank you very much. You didn't review, you acted like a petulant child who didn't get her rocks off so she's pissed.


Now, on to the fic...nice job, lovely characterizations, I would like to see more of them AFTER the Arin incident. Maybe then you could toss in more adult content.

my dear, you struck gold! one of the best laby fics ive ever read!!! it could easily be made into the sequal, as in it would be marketable as a film, likely for a more mature audience, due to the blood sacrafices, but still, i think it would make the best sequal to the movie i have seen so far!!! you portrayed the characteerfeerfectly! i know i wont be able to say enough good things about it, so i'll just tell you it was marvelous and shut my trap :D i'll watch for other stories by you just in case you decide to write another hit :) much love- Wyrm of Souls

First of all, I must say, nice story. Though, it should have been posted at Fanfiction.net. This is not R, Hardcore R, or NC-17. For all the loveliness of the story, the lack of grammatical and spelling errors, this fanfiction DOES NOT belong in an ADULT FAN FICTION SITE!

Good Day To You,
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Awesome story!! I love it. It's a bit different from all of the Labyrinth fics that I have read, but I like it. It would be really awesome it you wrote either an epilogue to the fic. *Hint, hint, hint* ;) Maybe get some Jareth/Sarah bedroom action going on. :D

an excllent piece of writing! Are you planning an epilouge chapter? I hope so. I like the reference to Superman. Who knew the Goblin king liked movies? pe tpe to see more of your writing very soon

Your story was so wonderful!! Although i would have prefered something a bit more romantic from them....it turned out so very well! Thank you so much for the story!!

*stands and applauds* that is certainly one of the best labyrinth fics i've read in a long time. i loved the jareth characterization and certainly the fact that sarah could kick some serious ass. :) it certainly doesn't hurt that you're a skilled writer, with wonderful grammatical and diction handling. i'm sure you know how dreadfully annoying it is to read a fic with poor basics. however, i have one request... could we possibly see some smut attached to this? after all, you're on adultfanfic. i certainly wouldn't be against it. and besides, who will rule in the bedroom when you've got two strong people like jareth and sarah?