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for Broken Wings

by KCbakeneko

person dragonflyelj
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very good! I loved this.
person Talene
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sounds intruiing! Write more?
person Alex
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this start and hope you'll write more...
person Jun
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So far, you are doing an excellent job with this story. Labyrinth is one of my favorite movies so I am thrilled to see stories about it online. I like how you are portraying Jareth. He never seemed totally heartless, just went about things the wrong way. I hope to see more of this story soon. Keepo up the good work