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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello DancesWithGhosts,
Thank you for your response, I'm quite glad to hear that you were not offended by my somewhat blunt review. I don't review stories as often as I should, but when I do I try to be honest and thorough, as those are the types of
Thank you for your response, I'm quite glad to hear that you were not offended by my somewhat blunt review. I don't review stories as often as I should, but when I do I try to be honest and thorough, as those are the types of
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this story a while ago and decided not to review, but since you've taken it upon yourself to write another version, allow me to provide you with some constructive criticisms. Please do not take this as a flame.
Firstly, your wording is not rom
Firstly, your wording is not rom
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A message from the author:
Provocateur, first let me say I really love your writing it’s dark, indepth, sexy, humorous, and angsty. You wouldn’t also happen to go have gone by the name Guitarvoodoo? Just curious. Anyhow, you have a great style, ver
Provocateur, first let me say I really love your writing it’s dark, indepth, sexy, humorous, and angsty. You wouldn’t also happen to go have gone by the name Guitarvoodoo? Just curious. Anyhow, you have a great style, ver
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd kind of like a whole new story instead of this one in Erik's POV. That was great, though, and thanks for writing.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, wonderful, amazing, fantastic, I loved it!! Standing on a chair and applauding!! YES, I would love to see a version from Erik's POV!!! Masterfully written words of love, bravo!!
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heehee - wet Erik what a delightful image.
Hope you continue soon I'm looking forward to the next part.
xxkatyxx
Hope you continue soon I'm looking forward to the next part.
xxkatyxx
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Cliffie! Meanie. Fluffieness! Peeking Christine! Tears of joy! Your story has it all! ;D
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done for updating so quickly.
This chapter was better than the first. The interaction between Christine and Erik is very well written.
xxkatyxx
This chapter was better than the first. The interaction between Christine and Erik is very well written.
xxkatyxx
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=After reading first two chapters=
Oh, my...
=Blushes, giggles, laughs=
Oh, my...
=Blushes, giggles, laughs=
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww!!! I love this!! Please write more!!!