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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! I read your stuff on ff.net and came here for your other story. This story, as well as all of your stories, is awesome! We need a sequel! :)
Lotsa love, Bammers
Lotsa love, Bammers
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great work!! Loved it. The best Jack/Will story I have come across so far.
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! I feel everything came out good in this, Spiritually, Ecumenically, Sexually...yep. Veryyy good. With lots of wet sexy pirates and cute little sexy whelps. My complements to you who cooked up this little, hot, bothering, and tingley Fic. *bows* Your a very good writer, keep up the good work! Oh, yes and don't forget to drink your rum!! It's part of a balanced diet!!
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November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaahhh!
I LOVED it! And you know what I actually found funniest? The explanation that you wrote the last piece
at a party. Because I write my stuff mostly when I'm out somewhere, too, whether it's on the subway or
yes, drunk at a party.
I read a lot of PotC Jack/Will, but this is definitely one of my favourites. Keep writing, dear, keep writing.
*sighs* I need to see that movie again, 3 times' just not enough. :)
Hugs and thanks,
Alistra
I LOVED it! And you know what I actually found funniest? The explanation that you wrote the last piece
at a party. Because I write my stuff mostly when I'm out somewhere, too, whether it's on the subway or
yes, drunk at a party.
I read a lot of PotC Jack/Will, but this is definitely one of my favourites. Keep writing, dear, keep writing.
*sighs* I need to see that movie again, 3 times' just not enough. :)
Hugs and thanks,
Alistra
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was THE most incredible Jack/Will fic I've ever read. WOW!!!! You are now one of my fave authorHANKHANK YOU and write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, Miss JackSparrowsWhore, I've just read all of your story and it was brilliant! Lots of hu and and teasing! I couldn't wait to read the next and the next chapters. Please do some more.......pretty please with cherries on.......ooh, hang on, there's an idea!!
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, wow, wow.... What a story, like it a loooooot!! Will, so innocent, and Jack, every inch the pirate *g*. Very naughty, very sexy - fantastic!!!
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NYOOOOOOOOO!!!! How the HELL could you end it there!! you ARE a bitch!! *glomps on to leg and pets thigh* But I still love you...cause you write the dirty smutty storys, that I need to live... *smiles* More...please?
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's good for a first try, and I'm impressed. But, it's my duty to point out some phrases that just sounded weird:
"Will’s eyes were streaming tears as he curled his hands into the pirates dreadlocks."
Um...why is he crying? It doesn't hurt as far as I know, and Will is not THAT emotional right? You make it sound like he's in pain when he can't. Blow jobs are all good, when they actually get to penetration, THEN he can cry.
“his skin exploded as he reached his climax."
in..in...exploded? What? That sounds odd and brings odd visual imagery. Change it to HE exploded, or something of the like, not his skin.
Everything else was super. Love this story, even the slighfem fem Will. Can't wait for more... Though I suggest you read some more NC-17 slash just to get the terminology right.
"Will’s eyes were streaming tears as he curled his hands into the pirates dreadlocks."
Um...why is he crying? It doesn't hurt as far as I know, and Will is not THAT emotional right? You make it sound like he's in pain when he can't. Blow jobs are all good, when they actually get to penetration, THEN he can cry.
“his skin exploded as he reached his climax."
in..in...exploded? What? That sounds odd and brings odd visual imagery. Change it to HE exploded, or something of the like, not his skin.
Everything else was super. Love this story, even the slighfem fem Will. Can't wait for more... Though I suggest you read some more NC-17 slash just to get the terminology right.
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sweatdrop* I know what you mean by the 'insecurity issues'. *sigh* It's just kinda weird when you write smut down, huh? *snicker* It can stay in your head and drive you insane, but when you want to get it out and keep it down on paper, it just doesn't feel comfortable. BAH! I had the same damn problem!!! *grr*
I like this story!!! You seem to be doing well on the smut so far, so just continue the way you're going and it should be fineiggliggles* Jack's so...experienced with his mouth. I love it!
Toodles! (*snicker* 'Toodles'? The hell?)
Elven