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..dun..dun nearly pushed the review button before writing something ...*hits her head*
^_^ this fic rocked !
I really liked the way you made the characters ..especially Jack who is totally in character .. just as funny and unreadable.. anyway,
I'll be waiting for the next update (hope it won't be long ^^;)

YEAY SMUT!
Great chapter! Well done!
I love how unsure Will is of his feelings, and how totally calm Jack is being while Will;s losing his mind!
GREAT!
Luv ya!
Keep going!
Hurry up with the smut!
PLEASE!

*deep contented sigh*
This is the first PotC slash fic I have come across (I'm betraying my friends in doing so, I told them I wouldn't go into *another* fandom-ish world with slash slash galore! ^_^) andI'm glad I found this one first. Yipee!!! Tis a great story, lots of fun, and I even like reading your author's notes >P Heheh.. can't wait for more *cough* stuff *cough* But, I can give you no suggestions, as I am a completely unexperienced smut writer, but, as a reader heheheh ^_^' Anyway, your is a great fic, I wanna read more! You have all these good circumstances worked out, and poor Will *pats on head* But JACK *has trouble breathing, wants to pounce on him and do some naughty things*
Ahem. Anyway, I believe I am well on the way to having an obsession with PotC ^_^ Haven't had an obsession for a while, buyt anyway ^_^ Please please please conitnue!! Only a couple more chapters of it left? :( :( Oh well....
thank yeee

I really like it!! So cute with Jack giving Will swimming lessons!! Squee!! Please please please write more!! Also, I'll beta fou ifu if you want me to. Just e-mail me.

damnit!!!! don't stop!! e-mail me when you update!!! ... that was not cool. don't stop don't stop don't stop.. pikk!
as always,
tucker

whoo hoo! hehehehee yay for smut in the next chap! ^^ ~Leaf~

*gapes* O__O

HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT THERE?!?!? Please please PLEASE put lots and lots of smut in the next chappie, savvy? I need more JackWill smut! They're the sweetest! Well, most of the time...*snicker*

I love it!

Elven

*grins* Well then, didn't take long deardear Will to figure out the mechanics of swimming, now did it? *pats Will's head* A bright, bright lad, he. A little slow on the uptake when it comes to plundering his Captain, but I'm sure he'll come around. *blinks* Won't he? I'll give puppy eyes and a Willow 'resolve face'. *nods* You don't want that, do you? It's a potentially lethal combination. Hehehe. Having said that, I'll fall back on the well-used 'Very nice, more please'.

I love this story. The sexual tension prevail. BU. BUT, I do think that the smut should be held off, and leave us hanging until we're ready to strangle you for keeping us on the edge of our seats for so long, but on the otherhand, WILL YA HURRY UP AND MAKE WITH THE HUMPING!?

Ah-em.

Sorry. I'm in desperate need of more slash. Love the fic, love the sexual tension, love the fact that HOPEFULLY that Will will make Jack work for it. Alone of the ship, there is much that can happen.

Continue and hurry it up already.

GREAT STORY! I LOVE IT YOU SHOULD BE QUEEN OF THE WORLD! lol, no just crazy authoress me! Just wanted to say u people with ur reviews 'smut now, no have smut later but make us think its now, WITH HOLD ALL SMUT! But have it be now.' so lets compromise shall we....a little smuttyness now, MORE smuttyness latta! eh eh!! as guess what certain Turner is a -cough- *virgin* -cough- lol cuteness i promise, will update in a day or so! reviews make me happy, and they make me type a hell of a lot faster! (they also make me fail my math test but its all worth it) lol
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