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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story, and cannot wait for more!
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heeheehee.... I love it! It's so... well........... I LOVE IT! Please update soon or else I'll track you down and.... um... MAKE YOU UPDATE! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *coughs* Good-good.
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
must get next chapter out soon! by the way, smut should begin in next chapter. great work.
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Gah! Died nearly when it said "Swan dived after his whelp" . HIS whelp. *dies*
Nah, Jack Sparrow is too real! But the thing is, all us girls can't have him, and we'd have to fight Will for him... So. Who knows fencing?
Moi
Nah, Jack Sparrow is too real! But the thing is, all us girls can't have him, and we'd have to fight Will for him... So. Who knows fencing?
Moi
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September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
“Well, ah least he swam…” That line caused me to almost collapse in fits of giggles. Which really wouldn't have been very dignified. Good story.
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Can't wait for the real stuff (even though the dream was thoroughly delicious)... poor Jack. I think Will's thrown *him* for a bit of a loop, eh, now?
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I could tell about the hyperveneveness in your An's....but not the Mt Dew.
Anyway, great update, and I like how Will is unsure of his feelings and still in turmoil with his mind.
But you gotta get to the juicey stuff soon. Please!
Still, great update, well done!
Anyway, great update, and I like how Will is unsure of his feelings and still in turmoil with his mind.
But you gotta get to the juicey stuff soon. Please!
Still, great update, well done!
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bwuah! Will frightened Jack right outta the room! Good on Will! *grins* Cute, and I think I even caught one of the plays on words again. Yeah for me. ;) I like, and I won't tell the Captain that you're our whore as well. ::rum all 'round::
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
poor whelp, he's soo confused, and the sparrow isnt helping matters much! can't wait to see more
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it slowly, slow is good. I´mean you can write a Jack Will story in two sentences: "Will go after Jack. Jack will be a pirate. Both fall deeply in love and fuck" o.k. there were three sentencest wht where is the fun? I love slow, take your time!