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Wow, you update fast!
I had two chapters to read. Thanks so much..but..
I WANT SLASHY GOODNESS!
PLEASE!

'...penetrating something in Will, that had remained, up until this point un-penatrated.' Caught that one. *grins* Dunno if it was :meant: to be a pun or not, but gave me a bit of a chuckle nonetheless. Right, that was very... Hrm... Very much like dangling the key to a prison cell before a condemned man, and then giggling and skipping away with it instead. Tease. And as you said that reviews will in effect make you drop everything and write more, here it is. A nice little tidbit. Which of course leaves me wanting more, darn you, and no doubt that was the intent. I'd like to see where this all is going. Will seems terribly befuddled. Which makes sense. And it's amusing to watch him gape like a fish whenever Jack walks in and speaks as though he should know what's going on. *g* Lovely ::holds up a flask of rum, then pulls it away with a grin:: Oops, I can tease too. ;)

Great start - keep going, please.

GURGLYTOFLELERFLENESS! WRITE MOREEEEEE!!!!!

For a virgin lemon writer, you're doing very well. Don't stop here! I can sympathise with your apprehension...I remember, when I wavirgvirgin slasher...*goes all nostalgic* Actually, no, I can't remember a terrible lot, except that I was dead scared of writing the smut. But it comes naturally in the end...sort of...with experience, I suppose :p
Anywho, it's a good plotbunny, and I look forward to reading more :D

Update..Update now!
Love how Will is in turmoil over his feelings. ANd how Jack is being so damn stubborn!
Great fic.
NOW UPDATE!

Love your name.^_~ Hope you write more soon and have Captain Jack cheer up Will. Nothing a little rum and some seduction on Jack's part that won't fix, savvy?

Yes, you can write. And because there are millions of people out there, who can´t, I ´m begging you: Write more! Write now! I´m more than happy to read it.

CONTINUE! *dies* I must read more! Kyute so far!


Earen

Good start to what looks to be an excellent story! Keep it up. I look forward ta be reading more chapters. Savvy?