rate_review Reviews

Hey, I liked it. Too bad that didn't really happen in the movie, lol.
Keep writing, k?

good start. more please.

*bounces*

YAY! the way the movie shoulda ended!!!
likeliked the bit with Will being out of body... well.. kinda out of body, during that begining part *nods*

not sure why he doesn't know how to swim.. you thinkt aht would be something people living in a port town would wanna know... silly Will... spent too much time in the smithy *nods*

can't wait for more!

Update soon please!

Oh! I am so excited about this story! Lately my favorite fandoms have been flooded with badly-written stuff and mary sues so its lieflief to see something really good starting up. You write well, lots of action, lots of excitement, good grammer and spelling. I will be checking back everyday to check for more chapters. Lovely!!

Very good, I loved it and cannot wait for more to come out, and if anyone else knows how I review, when I write something this short it means I couldn't find anything to criticize and I honestly loved your story in all the different aspects of plot, spelling, grammar, characterization, and anymore of those Little Fun Things that people like me like to point out to losers. Well, since I didn't, means your story was very good, just had to explain that to you. Keep up the writing, to many of the writers here should just give up and get lost, and so someone of your merit is wonderful to find.

-Edward ai Sai Silverfang

you must update!!!!!! eeeee, this is good! heheheh ~leaf~

*snerks* 'I'm not sure I deserved that'. Cute. I like. I've been thinking that Will's brush with a watery grave early in life would probably hinder his learning how to swim. Nice to see that I'm not the only one who thinks so. I like your writing style, and dear Will's mindset. And you do a good job of keeping in character with Jack. Which I think is the hardest thing about PotC fanfic. He's barmy enough that writing him is terribly hard. For me, anyway. And others, as well, from what I've been reading since becoming overly obsesssed with this particular fandom.

Anyhow... Lovely story thus far, definatly looking forward to seeing where you go from here. ::bottles of rum all around::

*lmao* stupid whelp, doesn't know what's good for him! i want some smut in here, savvy?