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I really have to admit this is a change from the usual PotC fics I've read. In fact, it's the first dominant!Will I eve ever read. ^_~ But it's great the way it AnotAnother thing, I enjoyed your characterizations of the people, but this was itching at me the whole time; How come Will was on the ship? I mean, we can get the idea of Will/Jack (wouldn't be reading otherwise!) but at the end of PotC, he was going to marry Elizabeth. Wouldn't it seem better to at least give us a reason as to why he's with Jack instead of Miss Swan? Oh well, your story, your rules! ^_^

~Hiriyou
(Hiryuu on adultfanfiction.net)

Whew! *fans self* Think I neecoldcold shower after that, lol. Very very good. Very very smutty. *drools* Very nice dominant Will. (Though I still maintain that Jack wears the pants in that relationship :p)

This is a really, really good story, and definately well written. Christ, they need to add this stuff into the movie! Oh, and I think Jack being ticklish is just so hot. ;) Lovely. Love the dominant Will, it's a much needed side of this pairing. Great Job!

Wow- dom Will! I like that. This was a deliciously written story, no doubt. I enjoyed it a lot. Great work!

I can say without complete honesty, that you have written the best POTC fic on this site. Absulotely WONDERFUL, darling. I wouldn't mind if Will felt the need to teach Jack a few more lessons. It was nice to see Jack being the one tied up..

Ow-OW! I don't usually like the Will dominant scenario but that was pretty spiffilicious! God to see Jacky like that would be yummy................hmmm what? oh good fic, likey likey! more I hope?