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for Give me Love, Give me Life

by Clong

person Cayenne
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you have no idea how much I adore this story. It's simply the most well written and well thought out piece I've found in POTC fanfiction. The characters are beautifully written and full of life, it makes me jealous that I can't write like that! Haha.

I really like how you've slowly introduced a conflict into this series. Whereas the first story was strictly Jack/OFC, you've introduced another character into the second story that is perhaps going to cause a little trouble for Jack. And what will he do now that he's gotten a bit of insight into the type of business his 'Brandy' does? I would really like to know (like, REALLY), but you haven't updated this wonderful work in over a year! I really hope you decide to continue. It's a shame to let such a wonderful story go unfinished!

-Cayenne
person Akuma
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aiya! I love this story to bits and pieces, and I adore how much detail and work you put into your writing. It really shows.

I was just wondering if you are ever going to update? :( Please do! This story is far too goo (and intruging) to be left abandoned!
person Mrs. Sparrow
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wheels are turning, indeed. Please update. I'm curious to know what's going to happen... How Jack is going to deal with this and how his lady is going to handle it. Please please please update! It's been SO long!
person Ange
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg u are soooo talented!

i started readin boys of summer out of my love for you/jack fics, espec you/jack NC-17 stuf (wot can i say, he's HOT). i really admired how the sex scenes were FANTASTIC (probly the most well written iv ever read, descriptive without being at all tasteless), but there was a great storyline as well, & in just 3 chapters! it actuly got me all emotional & MOVED! - my fave thing in reading anythin. so imagine my joy when, upon clicking on ur name to see wot other fantastic things you'v written, i find the sequel to boys of summer! & now I'm addicted! its turned from somethin extremely satisfyingly emotional & sexual into a story that i've gotten so involved in, and your "you" charcter is just great, with a full history & everything that you've developed so well :)

PLEASE update soon, i cant wait. thanks heaps & keep up the great work!

Ange ^_^
person Suz
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, plot. And actual knowledge of sailing/ Caribbean plot. Plus orgasmic sex. I am sooo impressed.
person TigerLily
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, finally you've given us more! And how I appreciated it, and relished it. And now Jak is at odds... the suspense is already killing me. I cannot wait to see more, and please, let's see more SOON! :D Thank you for this marvelous piece of work!
person Cherish
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's been such a long time since you've updated! This is my most favorite story, in the whole entire world, and I am anxious to see what happens. You're a wonderful writer, and I can't wait till you post another chapter... or two. *wink*
person A Faithful Reader
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The happiness I experienced when I saw you had written not one, but TWO more chapters to this story was a relief. I check this place every day to see if you have updated. Your knowledge of ships and such is amazing, and you write it all so beautifully.

I can't wait to read more!

-Rae-
person giova
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellant!
person Arella
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing, luv.
Once more you succeeded in making me eager for more, more, MORE!

Please keep on the good work! :)