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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooooh! Shiny story!!!!!!! That's so sweet!!! Keep up the smutty happiness!!
-Captain Jill Loon of the Green Pea
*Sails away with First Mate Sam Crane and Second Mate Adria Falcon to do battle with rival Pirate, Captain Adrienne Dove of the Blue Saphire*
-Captain Jill Loon of the Green Pea
*Sails away with First Mate Sam Crane and Second Mate Adria Falcon to do battle with rival Pirate, Captain Adrienne Dove of the Blue Saphire*
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I seriously just drooled all over myself. That was one damn good love scene! I liked sto story about little Tom... kinda made me think of the market scene in Aladdin...
Anyway, please keep writing! It's a breath of fresh air to get a break from all these Jack/Will fics (and I never really saw the perfect kind of chemistry between them, so I'm not too much into yaoi involving those two).
Anyway, please keep writing! It's a breath of fresh air to get a break from all these Jack/Will fics (and I never really saw the perfect kind of chemistry between them, so I'm not too much into yaoi involving those two).
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Guh!! Oh,my. I think I need a really cold shower now. Great, great part two. *sigh* I'm soooo melty now...love Jack--and this fic--so much.
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I keep checking, but no more chapters. Please update soon!
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Who's rusty? Certainly not you!
Great restart, luv - I loved your boys of summer and I got a feeling I'm gonna love this even more.
Please keep on going!
Great restart, luv - I loved your boys of summer and I got a feeling I'm gonna love this even more.
Please keep on going!
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October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how happy I was to find a sequel!
But like Jack, your stories are irresistable. Now you have only made me wish for a trilogy.
-Rae-
But like Jack, your stories are irresistable. Now you have only made me wish for a trilogy.
-Rae-
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October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why not name her Vanessa? After Johnny Depp's wife.
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October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And VERY good writing, by the way. Good wording and images. Not to mention the lemon scenes. *drool* Mmmm, Jack. Me gusta mucho.
I DID notice something in "Boys of Summer" that happened quite often (haven't checked this part enough yet to see if it has the same), was that you'd switch between past and present tense frequently. It happens, I know. I'm no stranger to it myself, buke ske sure you stay in a single tense!
If you need a beta reader, I'd be happy to do it.
I DID notice something in "Boys of Summer" that happened quite often (haven't checked this part enough yet to see if it has the same), was that you'd switch between past and present tense frequently. It happens, I know. I'm no stranger to it myself, buke ske sure you stay in a single tense!
If you need a beta reader, I'd be happy to do it.
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October 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so very incredibly happy that you are writing a sequal to AtBoSHG! I loved that one and I'm sure this one will be great! Please continue!
Captain Jill Loon of the Green Pea!!!!! *squeals, looking at calendar marked "months until PotC", sees wait, eye twitches*
Captain Jill Loon of the Green Pea!!!!! *squeals, looking at calendar marked "months until PotC", sees wait, eye twitches*
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October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lady a -- you are a truly gifted writer. seriously. you're story is certianly different, and i think it's different in a positive way. i was sho tha that you posted a sequel and really REALLY happy. i couldn't have asked for more in this chapter. i feel as though you have jack dead on and it's a pleasure to read. keep up the excellent writing and UPDATE SOON! ;)