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You have no idea how happy I was when I read that this was a sequel to "After the Boys of Summer Have Gone"!!!

I'm THRILLED that you decided to make a sequel! Carry on please!!

Lady A- Thank you, thank you for continuing your story of Jack and the Lady! I love the interaction between the two. The lady does understand the essence of Jack- you can't pin down the will o'the wisp that is Jack. I also like how Jack sees the spirit of the Lady and appreciates her independence. I would venture a suggestion of a name for the Lady be Cassandra. Jack returns to her just as Odysseus did to his lady after many adventures. Please don't make us wait too long for more!-----CQ

Thank you Thorn for pointing out I had a major typo of using first rather then Second. I thought I had change all of them, but I must have missed one, or just had a brain fart.

Other then that I can appreciate that some people might prefer a thrid person story, which is why I expressed what kind fo story it was in the headers. And I have been asked to turn this into a thrid person story at some time in the future. I just might, but that will wait for that will even be more work then this ABH which is hard in and of itself. I myself find a good ABH refreshing on occassion, but everyone has their own flavors.

I wrote it like this to be different. So its not all the same as the majority of all the other stories here (well that and its het fic... LOL)

And for those who are enjoying, thank you for your kind comments. They make my day. And I am continuing the writing. Unlike the first one which was already done when I posted it, this one I am positng chapter by chapter.

You're writing in second person, not first. I don't see any reason for it to be written in second person either. It'd do much better in first or third.

ABH's are traditionally written in the second person, thorns. If you didn't care for the story, then say that. That would be a review. Telling LadyA in what style she should have written it is a bit arrogant. It's her story. She can tell it in whatever "voice" she deems fit. If you don't like that, don't read it and go write your own fic.

Lady A, I'm enjoying this one as much as I did After the Boys.... I can't wait for the rest!