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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely enchanting. Each of these Contradictions parts just keeps getting better and better, and the sexual tension between Jack and Will keeps getting stronger. With how you're leading this tale, readers will be frantic when you finally have them together. The scene at the end with the tasting of each others hands was hilarious, but fit in with your story line so well, and it was funny seeing Jack and Will change places in the way they would normally act in a situation like that, but your explanations about why they acted such are explained clearly in the rest of the story.
-Eddie
-Eddie
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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You write the characters so well. You didn't skimp at all on Jack's character. You made him 'Captain' Jack Sparrow, how he talks, and thinks. I know of few who can write Jack and Will in character. Your very good and a can't wait till you write more.
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this series!! It's wonderfully written and the characterisation is excellent.
Good Job!!
Good Job!!