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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that's what should have happened lol. Other than the computer glitch typos, I only have one problem with it. You said she warrped his erection around her lips. I'm fairly certain it should be the other way around lol.
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story!
I'm glad to see Will/Elizabeth stories. And that particular scene in the movie did leave me wondering what would've happened had the kiss not been stopped.
When she pulled his hand to her chest I imagined Beavis and Butthead saying "boing" as he probably popped wood.
slash is ok but it's nice to see some hetero smut going on.
Thanks for writing this!
I'm glad to see Will/Elizabeth stories. And that particular scene in the movie did leave me wondering what would've happened had the kiss not been stopped.
When she pulled his hand to her chest I imagined Beavis and Butthead saying "boing" as he probably popped wood.
slash is ok but it's nice to see some hetero smut going on.
Thanks for writing this!
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December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous! I love it!
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Started out good..could have been a bit more tastefully written towards the end but a good start
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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well that was nice. I love a nice, explicit love scene, gets me all hot and bothered. Lol
Good shit, keep it up.
Good shit, keep it up.
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad somebody picked up where they left us gasping for more in the movie....fine job!
Deb
Deb
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think this was going to be as good as it was. And it was very good. I'm not a huge PotC fanfic person, but this was excellent. Nice job.
Jen
Jen