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for One Touch

by sinewa

schedule January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful! I love that you wrote it in the first person, it makes it even more personal!
Bravo!!
person Phoenix Red Lion
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I LOVE THIS! I really love how ya wrote this...with only Anakin's view point. It was cool seeing his fears and such, yet at the same time not able to resist. I especially liked how ya included his fear of losing his master...it appears quite often in the books and such. Great job! And lovely smut too. He he he.
person Dayast_Joy
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a sexy and touching treat. I don't usually enjoy POV stories, but I liked the way you expressed thought and desire in Anakin's voice here. Hope you share more, please alert me if you do :) Well written Obi-Wan/Anakin pairings are rare indeed.
person Raquedan
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Touching. And not in the way you're thinking. I liked it.
person Inu
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::kidnaps Ani and runs away:: .... ::comes back for Obi-Wan too:: I loved this, I hope you write more.
person GothVamp
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Very beautiful. I love this pairing
person sapphirexkat2
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww! please write more! a sex scene would have been great. hah.
person LadyKenobi
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful piece of slash. Kodos to you for a story well written.
person Guinastasia
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, now THAT was hot. Very, very hot.