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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person Morgana-Li
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn, I love this fic! keep it up!
person Miya Sparrow
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK there is a lot I want to say. But let me first say this WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (pretend that is in really really big font). if Disney hadn't made POTC all... Disney like, and it hadn't been Disney to make POTC. and it was rated NC-17 this would be the result. Cause to me it kind of sends out the same message as POTC did in way, I mean, well I don't know what I mean. I really liked it, its just another, interesting, cool, violent way for Jack and Will to meet, and as much as Jack doesn't like it.....fall in love. You know Jack does that all the time? He realizes that he's falling for some one, and then messes it up, all for reputation, and some other things. but OMG please update. God if you don't I'll die. A painful agonizing death. ahahahah right UPDATE!
person Rutaari
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! NONONONONONONONONONONOONNONONONONO!!!!!! Jack is stupid and Will is in trouble and Gov. Swann is a lying ninny and where in the nine hells is Liz and OMG! PLEASE hurry or I'm gonna explode! *sniff* You can't leave Will drugged for TOO long.
person eOR=^.^=
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah! checked the site just at the oppurtune moment!
um.. happy april fool's~
funtabulous chapter! i especially loved the bit about how will felt a sense of pleasure when his wrists started bleeding.
huzzah!
person eOR=^.^=
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah! checked the site just at the oppurtune moment!
um.. happy april fool's~
funtabulous chapter! i especially loved the bit about how will felt a sense of pleasure when his wrists started bleeding.
huzzah!
person RoseGarden
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My poor Will...and poor Jack. The thought of them being separated breaks my heart. I hope Jack comes back for him and whips ass in the process. Keep the chapters coming..your fans are still with you
person anonymous_fan
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter *dances around diliriously* hehehe good chapter too update soon if you can :)
person ayachan
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaahhh!!! son of a .... biznatch! SWANN CAN'T DO THAT TO WILL!!!!! -_- omg, you just have to get Jack and will together asap.. and put Swann to ruin.. massive ruin.. and massive humiliation.. make him a homosexual or something argh! well, please keep up the good work and update asap please
person sallie
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sits down at computer*
"Let's see what's the list of things that would make me reeeeeeeeaaaaally happy
to see in this story?"

1. Norrington, Avery, Bosun, Barbossa, Mr. Swann, and majority of Norington's crew
(not including Pintel or Riggetty... maybe not Kohler too he's kind of cool...),
and Mr. Gibbs all die very painful deaths. By killing eachother off!
2. Gov. Swann get's raped by Norrington. (revenge on the stupid homophobe,
and not good for old Norry either!)
3. Avery has to watch while #2 happens! (EWWWWWWWWWWWW)
4. #2 happens to Avery and Swann has to watch. (ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww)
5. Gov. Swann looses job and money! (Take that pompous git!)
6. Jack and Will & Anna and Elizabeth get back together. They heal eachother's
old wounds.
7. They all have many adventures.
8. Gov. Swann, Barbossa, Bosun, Norrington, Avery, and Gibbs are in prison for life.
9. (Continuing from #8) They become BITCHES!
10. Will and Jack have hot/sweaty boy-on-boy love!
11. All of Ex-gov. Swann's money and estates go to Will, Elizabeth, and a foundation
that supports homosexuals that have been harmened. (counceling, doctors, the works.)
12. Hahhahahaaah Norrington and Swan are BITCHES!!!!
...
O.O
Can't wait 'til the next update! Hope one of the above happens!
person evelyne
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! what a turn of events. though the end is near, hopefully there'll be more..?



poor will! still totally loving the story though. actually, i'm dying for the last chapter. will and jack forever separated would be such a heart-wrenching, but smart, end. it's sometimes nice to have things have happy endings. i think i actually cried when jack dragged will back to his old dwelling.

perhaps the reason why i'm so drawn to this fic is because it's seemingly realistic.