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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person evelyne
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! what a turn of events. though the end is near, hopefully there'll be more..?



poor will! still totally loving the story though. actually, i'm dying for the last chapter. will and jack forever separated would be such a heart-wrenching, but smart, end. it's sometimes nice to have things have happy endings. i think i actually cried when jack dragged will back to his old dwelling.

perhaps the reason why i'm so drawn to this fic is because it's seemingly realistic.
person dr. robinson
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just noticed a typo in my message from above..

i meant to say.. it's sometimes nice to have stories not have happy endings. makes it more realistic.


also, after reading the message u left the anonymous person.. just wanted to comment on the brilliancy of having a sequel involving lots of norrington. i was, initially, rather disappointed from your author's notes in the story, because you had said something about norrington's role dwindling. but the sequel already sounds funtabulous. so, keep up all the fab work!!! norrington's such a distorted character! but all for the better-
person To Anon_Fan from Lydia
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I don't know if you'll check this, but since ya didn't give me an e-mail I figured this was the best way to answer your question. I meant a new chapter, not a new story. I do plan on making a sequel to this story as you probably know from my author's notes, but I'm going to wrap up all the shit with Will & his family first. Sequel will deal with Norrington and all that joy.

Thanks for your interest in the story. I really appreciate it. ^_^

~Lydia NightShade~
person Anonymous_Fan
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NOOOOO! how could you do sumthin like that to poor little will *sniffs* jack was very mean to him and even though i love this story i wanna cut jacks balls off ! *pulls out rusty meat scissors with evil glint in eye* can i do it pleease???? i hope that everything gets better in the end cuz jack and will in this story make such a perfect pairing :) i love this story btw and cant wait for your update :) oh and good luck with school lol, i hope it doesnt wipe you out too much....btw when you said start fresh, did you mean a new story or a new chapter cuz i really hope you meant new chapter lol
?
person SilverScaleSerpent
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bites lip, staring at screen.* Poor Will... there will be more, won't there? Soon, preferably?
person tomo
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Jack! poor Will! I'm truly looking forward to next chapter.
person rutaari
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG You evil bitch how could you leave us there!?????

GAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!


person sallie
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O
This chapter was sooooooo sad!
I am morbid though so I enjoyed it.
I really hope that you update soon with a longer chapter,
but until then...
“Many thanks.”
person Jackwill
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg... I can't even begin to describe how much that moves me emotionally... please update soon! this chapter just about broke my heart!!
person madden
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!!! update soon i've been checking like daily to see if you'd updated! such a good story, the last chapter had me in tears, that must have been so hard to write! please please please update soon

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