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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My F***ing God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was sooooooooo AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon kay?
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!!! It's about time you updated this!!!!! I was going to delete the link tonight, thinking that you'd never update it!!!!
I'm so glad you did!!! I love the story!!
I'm so glad you did!!! I love the story!!
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, please update again soon.
I've enjoyed where this story has been going but I have one request. Shouldn't you write something with Barbossa. After all this time, he's kinda been forgotten about but surely he's been cooking up nasty schemes all this time. Is he working with Norrington or perhaps competing with him to see who can catch Will first?
Hope to read more soon.
I've enjoyed where this story has been going but I have one request. Shouldn't you write something with Barbossa. After all this time, he's kinda been forgotten about but surely he's been cooking up nasty schemes all this time. Is he working with Norrington or perhaps competing with him to see who can catch Will first?
Hope to read more soon.
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November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay, you're intro thingy sux. i read all but this story and this is the best fricken thing i've ever read. I've been waiting for months to read an update. pleez give more, pleez
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
noooohohoo EVIL cliffy EVIL!
Please update soon, poor Will!
Oh I LOVED the bit about the keys and little girls diaries, it's so very true!!!
I <3 this story SO much!
Please update soon, poor Will!
Oh I LOVED the bit about the keys and little girls diaries, it's so very true!!!
I <3 this story SO much!
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! this was the 1st POTC fanfic i read *and my 1st time of actually reviewing*, and it's still one of my favs! (i also lurve ur "price of rum" fic)
so glad u finally updated~
and i absolutely cannot wait for norrington to get will!! i'm expecting to be sorta like barbossa from the price of rum.. which was amasing. your writing is very good, but i think you could heighten the intesity (or suspense..?) even more by going into more depth when describing will's physical pain. in my opinion, i think details of physical pain would be able to create much more pathos for our beloved protagonist~ well, it was just a thought/suggestion, but what you're doing now i completely fine by me. i suppose i'm only saying this because i lurrrve reading about rape and torture..
that's all! i hope this review encourages you to post chapter 29 faster~
so glad u finally updated~
and i absolutely cannot wait for norrington to get will!! i'm expecting to be sorta like barbossa from the price of rum.. which was amasing. your writing is very good, but i think you could heighten the intesity (or suspense..?) even more by going into more depth when describing will's physical pain. in my opinion, i think details of physical pain would be able to create much more pathos for our beloved protagonist~ well, it was just a thought/suggestion, but what you're doing now i completely fine by me. i suppose i'm only saying this because i lurrrve reading about rape and torture..
that's all! i hope this review encourages you to post chapter 29 faster~
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October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!!! *Happy Dance* YAY! Super-Jack to the rescue! I can't wait for more of this! I really can't! Please update soon! Though I understand the "unable to write" bit. 'fraid I've lost a few muses to a few stories of my own. But PLEASE don't lose this one! *pouts* Please?
Rutaari
Rutaari
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mas por favor!
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright i'll admit....for a long time i didn't read this b/c the intro sounded dumb but now i must admit.......I'm ADDICTED.
Okay..... I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE..... Paleeeez give me more, i need more. I love this story i must read more pleez it is so good. I love the charecters, wasnt keen on the setting at first but now its grown on me.
'`*~YOU RULE~*`'
Okay..... I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE..... Paleeeez give me more, i need more. I love this story i must read more pleez it is so good. I love the charecters, wasnt keen on the setting at first but now its grown on me.
'`*~YOU RULE~*`'
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG. DUDE. I LOVE YOUR FIC. WRITE MORE. o__o!!! PLEASE. LOVE. LOVE. LOVE.