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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person hellodemonkitty
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a new chapter, i've been waiting soooo long for your next chapter, i love this story, please keep writing it, can't wait for the next chapter
person Tri
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it me again. I am not happy. I want more. I want more now, Plese? I am begging you *on knees pleding for the next chapter*. Can you get the next one out soon? Plese?????????????????


Care,
Tri
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. just wow. i really love this story, i read it on a different website and when i found it here there was another chapter! so now that i've read that one, i'm in desperate need of more...
person bootstrapssisster
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*laying on the ground drooling* Need m nee need more. *repets like chant* I hope you can get text ext chapter up soon. *looks at her self* I an being pathithic. *shakes head at her self* Well... anyway, I cant wate for the next chatper and I hope it comes soon.

Care,
Tri
person Vana
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am still loving this story and nearly danced (if I weren't as sick as a dog) when you updated...but the strangest thing occured while reading.

I started craving Pringles like hell and promptly grabbed money, went across to the shops and bought two tubes of sour cream and onion...plus two mega bags of m&m's to boot along with fruit juice to hopefully compesate the horrid amount of calories and plain raw fat being pumped into my leadened arteries...

*looks to the hidden bag of goodies behind her cupboard door by her elbow* Am sneaking and munching them so my parents don't know. What I find amusing about this is that I'm old enough and some to live alone in another country with a supportable incom and maybe even have kids if I weren't gay...and yet my folks still rule my life. I love them heaps...but they love to wrap me in cotton wool. Imagine what is worse...them leaning over and finding the hidden bag of goodies and subjecting me to much lectures on watching my health...or them leaning over and finding out I read intense slash, love gore, enjoy horrid slash scenes of a N/C nature and am also gay if they read my online journal. Hmm...what is worse indeed.


~Vana E the Sadist~
person Butterballs...abloodygain
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was so worth the wait, dear. LMAO @ Ana-banana. Sho cute =p I'm dying to see what happens with Norri...and more LMAO @ Ned Kelly. (You seen it yet?) Jack is sort of like Ned, in a way...hmm...

Geez, this thing is getting looooong. o_O Not complaining, though! ^^
person Gillian
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lydia! You whore, where have you been? I've missed you and the boys so much! *sobs*

Okay, I'm better now. I forgive you for having REAL problems in REAL life because you have written a wonderful chapter. Sad flashbacks are always a good thing. I cannot wait until there are billions of chapters one after the other. You are fantabulous. I lovel you to death. I only wish there had been footnotes in this chapter, but I adore you too much to whine. I have made my bestest friend in RL just as addicted to this story as I am; we both check for updates about a billion times a day. I looked tonight and saw the update and I called her and sh actually screamed. She was like, "AHHH! OMG! SQUEE!" Now, she usually isn't into the whole "fangirl" reaction, but you beat it out of her. Congratulations. Can't wait for more!

~Gilly
person MustIBeAMalfoy
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeals and runs in circles* You UPDATED! Yay! *throws confetti* I liked how Jack said his name was Ned Kelly. Tricky tricky! And I also caught the LOTR line at the end. *feels smart* Well I better go, but update as soon as possible.
L Kel Kelsey
person Sarryn
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The whole flashback with Will was heartrending! I have such sympathy for young children and the loss of parents. Beautiful job!
person Indie
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

I want to know if they're going to escape Norrington, and if they're gonna deal with Barbossa!!!!!

Please, please, please update!! Me and all my personalities are begging you!!! *gets down on knees* PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

OK, right...I have gone even crazier than usual. Methinks it is time for sugar...

Indie