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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person MysticLady
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write a new chappie soon! Its so good...LOL!
person rach
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi love your story
please write more when yove tve time
rach
person Jessica D.
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... *tis speechless* That was wonderful. I stayed up till 3 in the morning one night reading the first 15 chapters. Then I had to control myself and read the other chapters more slowly. YOU MUST POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!! NOW! Oh, sorry, I get a bit carried away, but yes, I shall be waiting. I'm so glad Gilly told me to read this story. I think you might have emailed her back and forth for a bit. Anyway, it was awsome, I comend you for the help staving off my boredom. Guess I wasn't really that speechless...
person Sparrow\'s bonnie lass
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can't wait till the next chapter comes out. I love Jack in this. You write Jack and Will beautifully. I hope there are many more chapters to come.
person ButterBalls, making her 23rd appearance as a reviewer :p
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! What a perfect birthday pressie, the updating of one of my favourite fics :D Was slightly disappointed that Will didn't want to shag (okay, I have *got* to read something other than PWP), but 'twas all worth it...Jack's exclamations at the movie had me sniggering aloud, lol!
And more *jaw drops* at all the action and stuff. *waves flag* More!
person MustIBeAMalfoy
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whee I loved this chapter! *dances*

Love, Kelsey

PS Poor Willy and Jacky! :(
person katie_k
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you're like the only person i've ever heard of that's seen Empire Records - that film kicks ass!!! lol. neways, another perfect chapter. and really liking will's outfit in this, ooh, and the little goatie. so cute.

as usual, lovin' it

katie_k
person Gillian
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.....

(I'll elaborate later)
person glamis
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW!
I love brand new knows how to get what he wants the Liv tyler way!Will
and also
Pathetically easy to manipulate using the Will and sex combination!Jack
In fact i love them both, except Bo'sun he can rot in hell for hurting Will... Having said that can there be any will/norri non con action...i know i already asked, but i figured i'd bug you untill you gave in soooo... CAN YOU PLEASE PUT NON CON NORRI/WILL!, CAN YOU PLEASE PUT NON CON NORRI/WILL!, CAN YOU PLEEEEEEEEEEASE PUT NON CON NORRI/WILL!PLEEEEEEEEEEASE PUT NON CON NORRI/WILL!
Oh yeah and can i just say how pleased i am that poor frustrated Jack finally got his rocks off in the last few chapters, i was beginning to fell sorry for the poor guy!
person Juushika
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's okay, I talk to moths too. Why, I even had th fth friend once that wouldn't get off my hand no matter what I did, and just sat there licking me, which really tickled. So you're not the only crazy one *pats*. But anyhoo, I always do little dances when I see that you've updated. You have the magical gift of being able to make everything be horribly angsty, yet awfully funny at the same time. Or maybe I'm just sorta sadistic. But update soon! Or I'll... I'll cy! And whine at you! *shakes fist* arrrgh...