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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy shit...
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! yay, the song time bomb is by rancid from their 1995 album '...And Out Come The Wolves' ( just fyi) and one of my favs ever, i love this.... (I'm so late, but hey, i know how it rocks to get reviews!) i <3 gundam wing sooo much, when i read the high school's name i snickered a bit... I'm loving the characterization, ooc but it's not like waaaaay out there, if they where around now, i could see them this way!!
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me like dis
pls pls update soon
person Extraho
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im waiting e`agerly for chapter forty. i love your story, bikers really are 21 cent pirates
person LynZ
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah-ha-ha! Finally this thing has been updated! I've been checking back every week to see if there was a new chapter and I was so estatic when there was one tosay!
This is an amzaing chapter and I can't wait to see how the story ends... I know it would be a little cliche, but d'you think you could maybe give it a happy ending?
person berkie88
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.... complicated.... how are you going to fix this? the cops will have one hell of a time trying to sort out who did what... and then there are the people with records (what will happen to them?) and people like Barbossa with the conflicting statements... and where are Lizzie and the rest?

but you did say there will be a sequel so I have hopes for a happy ending... you will make it a happy ending right?

love all the references to other films and series they've been in! (I thought the Peter Drinkwater one was rather unknown actually. I only knew of it because I watch that series). and thanks for all the #. some I knew of but others...
and sometimes with the way you write it I can really see the Jack Sparrow from the movie walking around... with the hand flapping and all...
is he going to continue the precious thing he got from LotR? I rather liked the luv thing...

hope for more soon! it's been a while since the last update...
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooohh YOU!!!! I can't believe you ended at this point!!! YOU'RE JUST CRUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Will Will live? Will there be a happy ending with lots of snogging??
Update soon! Pretty please??
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It stoped....AGAIN! Why do you insist on doing this to me? Poor Will, he's just too damned pretty fro his own good. And Jack, oh Jack, the poor man doesn't know what to do- poor sexy beast. Where ever did the others go? Will they all make it? Will Jack go to jail? Can Barbosa die a horrid death after being raped by some big guy named Bubba in prison? Is there a happy ending coming in the next 2 months?

I'm still absolutely ADORING this story.

NEVER STOP WRITING (savvy?)

Aden Diction
-!-ADDICTION-!-
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaa!!! I've been following this story since about half-way, and I just read the whole thing at once today. I'm DYING to know what happens. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update!!! I'm begging you. This is oine of the bst fics I've eer read and I've been reading fics for years. Heh, I'll be sitting in class, and I''ll start wondering what will happen. Please update soon! ...I'll be your best friend!! <3

~Syn
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are EVIL!!!!!!!! ENDING THE CHAPTER THERE!!!!!!!!!!!
VERY, VERY EVIL!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!! I CAN'T STAND THE SUSPENSE!!!!!