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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person Sarryn
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite lovely and quite interesting and very exciting. Please do continue!
person glamis
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THERE'S GOING TO BE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

That was a nice long che! (e! ( i luv the j/w luv)
(But when i thought there might be a spider on Wills face that freaked me out little) as i am aspider wuss!
Anyways, i cant remember if i've reviewed before but i just want to say i love this story!
I'ts one of my favourites of yours as i think it has just the right balance of angst , and just a teeny bit of fluff, which is how i like it;) as overall i am an angst whore:)
And Jack/ Will are sooooo in love, i think they're g tog together!
I really like your characterisation of Will as sort of sweet, and innocent despite everything that's happened to him.
And that Jack is such a cad, kidnapping him and being all seductive...
All i can say is, at the risk of sounding rude... that maybe a tiny bit of norri/ will non con might be nice, even if it's just implied... in the future I MEAN, or maybe not, maybe wills' moth will fly into the eye of the bad man with the video camera, an permanently blind him before he speaks to Norrington, that would be fun!!!, and not without irony...
Anyway all i can say is UPDATE AGAIN AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!
person MistressofDragons
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kamikaze. . . the wind of god. . . litterally that's what it means. . . i love Japanese. . . of course kami can also mean hair. . . so written in romanji kamikaze can also mean hair wind! mwahahahahahahahahahahahaha! *cowers* don't attack me with your hair wind! i of of you! see i'm reviewing!
. . . ah yes. . . i'm in a mood. . . random is all ya going to get from me today. . .
hmph. . . at least you have reviews. . . and lots of them. . . i ohavehave three reviews for one of my stories, "Hantai no Dekigoto"(means contrary occurences) and only one for "The Knife-Edge" the final instalment in the Edgeilogilogy! woohoo it's almost done. . . but it still only has one reveiw. . .
. . . don't you love shameless self promotion?
. . . obscene socks!(don't ask. . . really. . . you probably don't want to know)
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one more thing!. . . that there is. . .
"You've let your doom in by the front door, but it won't depart that way." Mabrook, "The Last Unicorn"
. . . me loves that quote, not sure if i have it word for word anymore but it gets the idea accross. . .
. . . been driven mad by the randomness yet?
. . .
randomness is good! it's an art i tell you, an art!
i'll leave you alone now. . .
ja mata!
person GLAMIS
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah!!!, BEFORE I FORGET OVER AT THE ORLANDO BLOOM FILES THERE ARE SOME NEW PICTURES OF ORLI IN 'THE FACE'!
There the ones that were'nt put in the final edition of the magazine...
Anyway just thought i'd mention it in case you didnt already know, as i know you liked the original ( very sexy!!) pictures, and if i recall were'nt they the base for Wills fetish club look?
( that was a good look, Orlando should dress like that all the time...OF COURSE WHEN I TRIED TO EXPLAIN THAT TO HIM!!!...*while i was holding him hostage*,...ALL I GOT WAS A RESTRAINING ORDER;) some people are just SO ungrateful!
Anyway... if you scroll down on the home page of the obfiles to latest images they should be there...
unfortunately he is without the eye make up in them:(
person ButterBalls
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know I love you, Lydia, and there is absolutely nothing I can say that I haven't said before. Except, as usual, I'm itching to read more...and damn you for that accursed cliffhanger! :p
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly loved the chapter! Can't wait for the next one! I just love where the story is going. You practically gave me a heart attack when Will answered the door and Norrington was standing there. SO Glad to see that he wasn't really there and it was all just a bad dream! Well anyway keep up the good work! :)
person Gilly
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH!!! It can't end THERE! Okay, so it can, but, AHHHHHH! There needs to be more. *sings*Me love you long time!*is done*
person katie_k
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
'in large copious globs' - beautiful :)

ive been reading this fic for ages but this is the first update you've done since i found the reiview button - i know, i really should be blonde. im completely in love with pretty much all of your stories. i love the way you write - your characters are all done so well and and evrything you write, angst/fluff/smut, is amazing. i know i sound like im gus a b a bit, but i just attempted to write my first ever fic today after about two years of reading and its really not as easy as it seemed, so i have loadsa respect for your stuff.

neways i absoltely adore this story and your killing me with the waits between updates.

katie_k
person Rutaari
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant again, darling. I love what you're doing with this, thought I'm really anxious to see the first feeting of Norrington and Jack. creepy. Ooooh, and that allusion of FotR and Gandalf was fabulous!! Gandalf captured in tower + Will captured in tower= MOTHS!

Don't worry, love. I happen to work at a zoo in the reptile and insect department. You should see how people look at me when I go raving mad if they try to kill a spider. When I used to be a counselor at a summer camp I got "asked to leave" because one of the kids was about to kill a snake (it was a bull snake! harmless, just really big) and I shoved the kid away (wasn't sposed to do that?) and picked up the snake and walked off talking to it. hehe. Oops.

Fantastic job.

Rutaari
person Gillian
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
was that it? please don't let that be it!