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oh, one more thing, in one of the early chapters, will said that his parents' friend always drove a harley. was that friend by any chance jack? just a thought...

yeay they did it they did it! Woot! Hoobstank is pretty good, I saw them in concert in Febuary along with POD and Linkin Park! when are you going to write this sequal?
great chappie, update agains soonish

I love this story. A friend of mine told me to read it after she showed me that picture of Orlando. Little did I know you were the same author of The Price of Rum and Wolf in Sheep’s Clothing two of my favorites on here. Even though you haven't updated Wolf in Sheep’s Clothing in forever. Oh, by the way the title of the song by Hooba Stank is called "The Reason". I have the lyrics to most of their songs if you’d like them. Just e-mail me. Keep writing!

Three words:

IT'S ABOUT TIME!

:p

For the smut, I mean.

So, does that mean this story is almost over then? Aww I hope not! I love it so much! I loved the sex scene. It was very tender and loving, just what poor Willie needed. I also hope that Jack will soon kick Avery's ass. : Lov Love, Kelsey

i have to admit that i am both surprised and impressed. the level of mature love with Jack and Will is developing hugely (as is the angst). you can really see all their worries and fears, and also their love and affection. i liked how the love scene was VERY unsure; lots of fears of losing each other driving them on. you've really turned them into a great couple (take that, Walt!) from what was a big question mark to me not so long ago. i, naturally, hope they stay together, even if they are not so carefree anymore. also---and this is no rush to add this---when the word "love" comes into play with them, that should be hilarious (and sweet). they hso mso much trouble admitting their feelings to each other...well, i can't wait to see what happens when they get VERBALLY emotional. you've done a great job. you could pry this couple from the page, and you would actually have a realistic couple (oh, goddess, if only!). YAY!!!! moremoremore...

ohmygosh

*THUD*

*picks self off floor*

twas was wonderful honey!!!! SMUT AT LAST! PRAISE THE GODDESS! I just love to see my boys getting down and dirty! :P

This chapter was amazing - very well done to your smutboy, Mike! :P The sex...my god, the sex....guh.

i swear, i'll write a coh coherent review later - but meanwhiles, WELL DONE!!!!!! keep up the good work, please please please!!!!!

Fainpathe

*happy sigh* I'm sooo glad you updated. Yve mve made me very happy. And so did Mike, since he helped with the sex. Send him my love.

But, now it's getting angsty. I'm getting worried. Jack is going to "do something stupid" isn't he? Update and put my fears to rest!

*giggle* cute ending... i wonder how will will react in the morning! *snicker* this was a good chappie, will is so adorable and jack is damn sexy!! *glomp* i love it!! *kisses* thank you!!! i love you!!!!!!!!! please wriore ore soon!