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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person Glorry
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^__________________________________________^ Oh my Will Turner is high *lol* tse the cutie is really not the smartest eh?
I mean everybody know that you can get high when you are in a closed room or?
But real bad is the smell -.-°°°°

Are the girls in the next chapter or do you forgot them? That would be a real shame the two are so sweet together and I so want to read it when Will and Liz meat again ^______^ I so love happy ends yeah yeah I'm a real s but but hey I'm cute so whats the matter ^^y

I hope that I doesn't have make too much mistakes to read another language is real easy to write it is a howl other thing *looks real sad*
I hope you write much more chapters and please *puppy dog eyes* don't write too slowly plleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssee


By Glorry-chan
person Cashiel
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"I w hav have sex with you really much badly." *g*
Another amazing chapter from the queen of fanfic.
person Herald Soucree
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do you have some disease that makes you ALLERGIC TO SEX?! Where's the lemon?! The next chapter is taking to long...
BTW, I added this to my reccomened fics. :D
person mia g
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kik ass chapter i luved it!!! hehehe they got high!!
person ButterBalls (is always too lazy to sign in)
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“Come, my lump of clay, and I shall mold you into a fine delinquent!”

You do realise I'm going to be quoting this for quite some time :p

LMAO @ them being high. Some of my friends like to do that...I should watch them sometime and watch the entertainment unfold.

I could KILL you for stopping the chapter here...but I won't because then we'll never get to the nookie. Which I've been waiting for since chapter one, I might add :p (Yes...I'm a PWP addict. *hangs head in shame*)

Note to self: steal Lydia's muses...and her imagination, too.
person Frankenmuth
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know...about a month and a half ago I never would have got why you called this chappie 420...

but I met a very nice man, and he explained it all to me...

in short, I love this chapper!
person Rutaari
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've said it before, I'll say it again. You are brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I love all your little allusions in your fic. They're so funny.

Hahaha! Fishbowl! The first time my bro and his friends ever did that was in my bedroom, and I didn't know it! (Don't happen to be a smoker myself, my body can't handle it.) I came in late one night (after all the smoke had passed) and collapsed in my bed, and couldn't understand why for the longest time I couldn't sleep, just started giggling at everything around me. "hehehe! look at that poster! he's funny..."

"Beep. Beep. beep, beep, beep, beep beep beep beep beep." LMAO! That was hilarious! That sounds just like me when I'm NOT high!!! LMAO! I can just see Will doing that!

Awww, poor Jack. Little Jack keeps getting abandoned. Hehehe. Can't wait for the next chapter. Don't worry Jack Jr! Lydia's gonna help you out! Oh yeah, when Will says "I'm yo daddy tonight." (or something like that.) I had fits. My friend African Grey Parrot knows me, and every time I walk into Kim's house it goes "Rachel! Who's your daddy!?" hehe. Donut is funny. (that's his name.)

Anyroad, great job, as always. Can't wait for the next chappie!
~Rutaari

BTW: Where's the next chappie of Wolf In Sheep's Clothing?
person alanna
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there.
About the (#) issue. Frankly I don't see it as an issue. Anyone whose read a 20th century printing of anything by Shakespeare knows that most of the publishers do this for words or phrases that may not make sense to the average reader. As with you fic the # can always be referenced at the bottom of that page in case you need the definition. So I guess what I'm saying is the # thing is no big. I'm actually rather used to it and knew what they were for immediately. I have to believe that I'm not alone in this. So keep up the great writing and don't stress about it. You're in good company wuth some very reputable publishers.
person Morana985
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I have no idea about a night club, but there is a bondage store in New Orleans in the French Quarter called Second Skin. Just thought I'd let you know.
person Eci_Frog
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!