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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person Kelsey
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jack and Will. Willie almost got hurt! *gasp* Don't hurt Will! LoL Anyways, keep up the good work.

Love, Kelsey
person Morelwen
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeay an update finaly, I love this story, it makes me laugh *squiee*
person Sarryn
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Entirely delightful and a joy to read...and another one of my darker delectations. Please do continue.
person JackSparrowsWhore
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you not suppossed to eat combos all the time??????????? Uh oh.

I loved it as always! OH THE SUSPENSE THE INTRIGUE THE DRAMA! Ahhhhhhhhh! Am actually afraid for Jack and Will! Will not sleep until next chapter updated. WIll probably stare at the street waiting for a motorcycle to drive by so I can attempt to save them. I don't make distinction between reality and fiction. Some call tupitupid, but i think it's a blessing.

UPDATE! Es ist spitze!
person ButterBalls
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lydia dear, I am *so jealous* of the fact that you can actually combine smut with plot, because all I can seem to write is freaking PWP. Not that's there's anything wrong with hard sex...but still...

Go Will on not taking Jack's shit! *claps* It's about time he grew a backbone (of sorts).

Norri's fully OOC, but that doesn't matter :p It works with the story. Will be very interested to see thinthings progress from here.

Have I mentioned that I love you lately? *bats eyelashes*
person Cashiel
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn you're good, girl.
I remain impressed.
person Gillian
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!!! i love this story. jack makes me laugh out loud and will makes me giggle with his off-hand comments. nakey! priceless. and the whole jack's stick thing? grand. i love that you put all of the little notes at the bottom. you are the first author i'vad tad that does that. i read that you are busy and the chapters are now incomplete, but please hurry. you have created an addiction and i can't even give head to get enough money to pay for it. (just kidding) anyway, TYPE, type as fast as you can!
person magget
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i may just have to kill you for stopping there.....EVIL THAT YOU ARE!!!!...update soon, i want to know what happens next...
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
bitch
person ButterBalls
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO @ mother-fucking-finally. I absolutely agree :p

Gruesome twosome…such a perfect way to describe Jack and Will! *snickers some more*

Um…I honestly don’t know what to say except ‘I love it’ for the bajillionth time. Will’s so wimpy I want to hit him upside the head and scream ‘Snap out of it!’…but then he’d just cry all over my shirt :p It’s okay, though…Wimpy!Will works for this.

Two words, my dear Lydia: Fuck. School. Slash has top priority! :p

No, really, I understand…I’ve got the same problem; have to write an essay on Tiberius bloody Gracchus and his reforms fnciencient History and I just failed my first Maths test so I think that’s saying I slash too much. Just don’t do a me and not update for, like, seven weeks :p