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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person mia g
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanx for the new chappie i really liked the " i look like such a slut" and "we can hear you" quote's those made my day
person Herald Soucree
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aragorn: A Shadow and a threat has been growing in my mind.
Legolas: How do you know?
Aragorn: *shrug* I had a hunch.
Legolas: YOU don't get hunches! I get hunches!
Aragorn: *smirk* I had one of your hunches Leggy. It felt good.

-From The Fellowship Quotes That Aren't!
person jackSparrowswhore
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! i love i love! Will is so unspeakably cute! yummy yummy! I wish clerks at my Hot Topic were that nice....they mostly just glare cynically.

YAY for Ana/Lizzy lovin! YAY for cheezy gayness! YAY for crazy hicks with special-ed brothers and morbidly obese mothers!

YAY for the fic YAY i say YAY!


(This is what happens whou gou go crazy.......)
person ButterBalls...again
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee! *happy dance* Just what I needed to snap out of my bad mood after using public transport at peak hour in 40-degree heat.

Dammit...I want Anamaria! :p Screw Liz, she can find someone else...

Yay! There was smut! :D Oooo, this is wonderful...sex in a change room...*sigh* Sometimes I wish I were male.

Did I say sometimes? I meant all the time, lmao.
person Lily
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story's great! I love it!

I was just wondering, how's Will gonna cope if/when he gets back home? I mean, it seems like the kid's developing Stockholm Syndrome to me (God, I should stop reading so much educational stuff!)

Either way, I love the story - keep updating!

Lily
person dark vampire
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!! another awesome che! le! liz and ana got together so fast!! i love it!!! they are perrrrfect together!!!! thank you thank you thank you! and jack being all protective! that was so adorable! and i loved the clercks helping them steal!!! what fun!! and the dressing room yummyness!!! you are the best ever!! thank you so much!! i love you!!! *kisses* thanx!!!! i love you! *huggles*
person Mel
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! great chapter...the whole store scene was sooo cute (wonder why?)! and lots of laughs and sweet stuff....yay. happy slashy (or regular) valentines day!
person Cashiel
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for making me feel better with that wonderful and funny chapter. Was having a bad day, but it just got a lot better. *g*
person Mercurial
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!

WA ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ah hahahaha!

(Can't....... breathe.... so much..... pain........)

~ Jenna.
person SilverScaleSerpent
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious but short. *pouts*. I'm going away for a week. Could you maybe get a new chapter up by the time I get back? Pleeeeeeaaaaaase! I live for your update.