rate_review Reviews

I only just found this story, but I really like it! I don't usually like AU's in this fandom, but this one is really good! I hope you keep working on it, the plot has lots of potential!
I read all your other PotC stories as well (all at once, I kind of obsess like that), and thought they were all great, esp. The Price of Rum. Hope you finish that one as well.
Take care,

Yay! New chappie! I love your story soooo much! :)
Love, Sylvie

16th great chap in a row! (how original of me)
overjoyed with W/J action, desperately hoping for more
plus, i'm glad to see lizzy back on the road (it's more interesting) - i wonder what's she up to ;o)
keep writing, please

avril

Hey there. Long time no read. hehe. Seriously, its been a while since I came back to this story simply because this northeastern cold spell is killing me. All I do is hover round the heater. Sitting at the computer just isnt happening. So, back to the review- already in progress. Nice two chapters. Will's breakdown seemed really genuine and poignant. I liked the sweetness of Jack's comforting. My favorite part of the angst is always the sweet aftermath, ya know? Okay and as for the sex scene, really nicely done. Sexy and believable. I'm really enjoying this story.

Chris

Well they never actually made love but I bet your saving the good stuff for later chapters ne?
I liked it :D

I am so sorry that I didn't thank you immediately for the last chapter. My internet service was messed up for a few days. Anyway... I really like both of them. It's so sweet that Will make Jack go kind of mushy. I like dangerous Jack, but I also like when he sweet side gets out. I thought the sex was good. It seemed more realistic than if you had them just go at it full tilt. Kudos to you my love. You are a GENIUS!

im glad u got it out now! Jack and will r u kno, and eliza is is up and goin. so now everything is gearin up for something spectacular! ... right ... ? and liz is gonna met annamaria aint she? soon? and then everything will work out. ... right ... ?

good. glad we got that clear.

update? soon? little bit of a cliffie there.. not much but hey!

GOD BLESS YOU, LYDIA! Wow! Great, great chapter! Actually, I still haven't finished reading it, but I have to say it's lovely! I find it frustrating that our favorite guys didn't make love, but I think it's better like that, more believable. Besides, it means they **will** make love for the first time in some next chapter, and I am sure the wait will be worth of it... Seriously, you wrote the whole love scene in such a tender, yet realistic way! It is nor dirty, nor sappy, and very, very touching... I am hooked on this fic, and since I began to read it, I have learned a lot of English (not my first language, I told you), especially very interesting words, like "nookie", which I didn't know and I will definitely add to my english vocabulary (and I hope I will have to use it a lot, hahaha!) Thanks, Lydia, honestly. And update soon, please!! There is a little smutty spanish girl eager for improving her English...
Love,
Carmela.

Okay, I think I can now forgive you for the ending of the previous chapter. *g*

Great, next chapter soon please.