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for Leave Me Lying Here

by lostmarbles

person someweirdchick
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAHHH!!! Ok, everyone, lets sing together: "Jack-and-Will-smut" *clap, clap, clap-clap-clap!!!* Oh! OOHH! You knew they'd be gettin it on at some point!! woo woo! *crickets* I get way too excited about slash fics... but there is nothing wrong with that!!! This chapter was so adorable!!! I had my doubts if they were REALLY gunna do it, but ye was wrong! I can so picture Will being all shy and adorable and blushing and.... everything! do ho ho...
person Sarryn
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Please write more soon!
person Night
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoooo!!!! An update!! Yippee!! That just made my day! Hey don't stop now, you're on a role! I like how you brought Liz back in, but will she meet up with Will or will she be intercepted by Barbossa! Hey we like Jack and Will together, their too cute!!! Keep writing!! Getting really interesting! :P Please!!!
person Quidditchbitch
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww! *glomp* I LOVE YOU! YOU DID IT! And it was sooooooo sweet. I'll be gushing over this chapter for a while 'cause you rock. (Even Will is a bit of a sissy.)
person Ume
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Squee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jack/Wiltiontion - whoo hoo - loved it. Will-bear is still too cute for words and Jack is just an old softy...well not all of him. Waiting for their adventures now that they're ready to hit the road and yay! you brought back Liz! No pressure but...post again soon please!
person dark vampire
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! yeah!!! finally some loooooove action!!! it was so sweet and wonderful and perect!ect!! you are awesome! i absolutely love you!!!! you're the best! no! better than the best!!! you are just too cool and lovely and wonderfully amazing for words!! *glomp* i love you!!! *kisses* thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!! and now lizzie's gonna' have her own adventure and she and ana maria are going to get together!! *cheers* this is soooooo exciting!!! *more kisses* thank you again!!!! *huggles* please write more soon!!!! i luv luv luv luv luv you!!!!!
person Morelwen
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I HATE YOU! WHY GOD WHY HAST THOU DEPRIVETH ME OF YAOI?!!!!!!!! I hat5e you you evil evil person! next chapter better hae some Will and jack lovin' or I might go chronicaly unsane!
person cay
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do hate you. Can't you put that chapter up now i've been waiting for ages, usually i woudn,t read on if their was no action early on. Update soon (please)
person Night
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, i must say, you know how to make the cliffs extremely high, and extremely steep!! Dang nab it!!! I really hope you finish it soon, or at least add on!! Poor Will, the guy's been through way too much! Jack's too cool, and Swann'serk!erk!!! Make it all happy soon, Will cannot go back with swann and Barbossa can not get a hold of Lizzie or Will!!! Please!! Write, write, write till you cannot write anymore!! (Preferably when the story's done)
person Glorry
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Farf how can you STOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP have you gone crazy ?_?
Pleas pleas write more I want wo know how the story goes from here.
Oh my I really really like thies story ^____^