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Poor confused, emotionally distraught Will. I continue to find myself most eager to read more. Excellent story!

This chapter was so great!!!!!! How can you end it like this??? Anyway I'm happy because they are going to make love!!!! So cute! :) I love the way Jack is taking care of Will,and I think Will noticed Jack didn't want him to go home because he would miss Will,also,didn't he? And he not Jac Jack desires him too...oh,really cute! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!! I liked also that the press found out about the kidnapping...it's more exciting this way! Will and Jack running from the cops and having sex hidden somewhere! LOL
Thanks for sharing! Mahie

You're evil, but I guess you knew that already...
This story just keeps getting better and better with every chapter. I absolutely love the way you're writing Jack, all confused and uncomfortable. It's so real I have no trouble picturing it, for which I thank you oh so very much. *g*
Keep writing.

gah! and again! GAH! no stopping, woman! get thee back to thy computer now! wow..........goood stuff, Lydia!!!! can i have your muse? :P lol! LOVing babbling!Jack! he's so cute! with the nakedness and thrminrming......gah yet again. keep it up! the work i mean, not Jack....although that would be good too! *eg*

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I love this fic so very very much! you must continue it forEVER. lol that prolly won't happeut aut at least update soon! It's so very very fabbity! And angsty (*sob*) and funny (heehee) and sexy (ow-ow!) lol sorry can't help it. Good job Update SOon!

NO FAIR!!!!!!!!!!! more than the actual sex, i'm dying to know if Will really wants him!! damn you...no, just joking. interesting turn with Gov. Swann...yeah bigots kinda blow. ah well. i REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY hope you update (sooner than a week) ASAP. love the story!!

YAY!!!!!!!!! Poor Will. Talk about depressing. I feel so bad for Frank! Will you let us know what happens to him? Hehehe, when I was little I used to say I wanted to be a limo driver. hahahaha. Actually, not doing much better now... But anyway, lets have some fun! Jack and Will! Will and Jack! Towels can be VERY easily removed! *wink wink* How about another chappie soon? Puweeeeez?
Rutaari

That chapter was GREAT!!! and I bet the next one will be even better. (Do ho ho) Oh, oh, OH! you HAVE to update soon... like now!............ or now?............. maybe now?...... (goes on and on)

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You're evil




I hate cliffies



It was supurbly good, though. Gah! I just can't get over the cliffie!!!



Update soon (pwease?)



I mean, like, really soon.



Or you could have a homocide (by lack of fic) on your hands.


~df~

Wow! This is os great ^.^ I love it! I hope you update soon!