rate_review Reviews

BITCH !!!!!! I HATE YOU.
no wait I'm sorry I love you.
You're wonderful and talented and a true gift of the goddess to the art of literature!!!!!!
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzz update like now.
OR I WILL FIND YOU !!!!!
p.s. not crazy i swear just really love this story and really hate cliffhangers. honest.

*gapes*

*eeps!*

*faints*

Jack: *sighs and picks up Elven's slight frame to dump her on the couch*

Will: *helps Jack*

Jack: *crosses arms over chest* You damn near killed her, Lydia...

Will: *nods in agreement* She's just fainted, is all, Jack.

Jack: *shrugs and throws a pillow at the prone Elven*

Will: *snorts as Elven bolts awake*

Elven: *stirring awake* Is it over?

Jack: Aye, lass.

Elven: *cries* BUT WHY!?!?

Will: *gags her*

Elven: -(*muffled*)- Bloody bastard! *sulks*

Jack: What she wants to say to you, since she's -(*makes vague gesture to indicate Elven, who scowls*)- you know...she wants to say that she loved it and is trying very hard not to--hey!

Elven: *freezes when Jack and Will look at her* -(*muffled*)- Wha'?

Will: *narrows eyes and snatches the remains of a pillow, blowing some feathers out of his hair* This is ~not~ productive, Elven.

Elven: *points to pillow* 'Tis the only way to rid me of me frustration, is all.

Jack: *sighs and shoves her into other room, locking the door*

She wants to say that she LOVES IT AND WANTS YOU TO UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU FREAKIN' CAN!!!

Will: *gags Jack*

Jack: *grins through gag* -(*muffled*)- Wha's after this part, eh Will?

Will: *rolls eyes and sits down to finish review* Thank you kindly. Elven wants you to update soon, and she loves the story. And the slashiness (hopefully!) to come. *turns to Jack* Satisfied?

Jack: *shakes head and tackles Will to the ground, immediately starting to feel him up*

Will: *sighs and submits to Jack's onslaught*

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! I LOVE SLASHINESS!!!!

Elven

P.S. Poor Will! Jack -(*turns to Jack*)- Make him feel better! And do it properly! *giggles*

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Oh crap. You're going to try and cheer me up, aren't you?

You are absolutely TWISTED to leave a cliffhanger like that! Pure evil, I say!!!

Keep it up, hun! Love the story! Better finish it or you'll have an angry mob on your hands *L*.


Falcon

*is dead*
lol

Oh god!!! amazing! more soon *please* :D

this story is great!! i lurve it!! poor will tho.... o well. jackll make it all better!!

That's just too much for me... PERFECT Chapter, I wouldn't change a dot... I liked it even more than number eight (I think it was number eight, the one in which Jack was about to take Will). But it was even better, so hot atilltill so touching and tender... Your AU has become totally complete and independent, I wish there would be a real filsed sed on it!! Work hard, go on writing (but don't forget about Wolf in Sheep's Clothing... I like this little smutty fic a lot!).
Love,
Carmela

gah! The third time I've read it and itjustjust as good as the first! In my opinion, this was the best chappie you've written. hmmmm. now i think I'll go read it again... *lumbers off in the general direction of chappie 14*


~df~

Uwaaa!!!!! Beautiful! I just read the entire thing to Chapter...er...well I bloody forgot but who gives a fucking damn? I love this story! Please continue! It's so rare to see a really well-done AU...and I really wanna see how Jack finally gets Will [consensually] in the sack. (heh heh that rhymes) I like the long chapters and so just update soon pretty pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssseeeeee???????

Waaaaaaaaa! *___________*
My favourite chapter!!!! I love you LOL! Amazing.... really... no words :)
Have a nice weekend :*