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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cute!!! jake is being sooooo sweet and wonderful and loving!!! *cheers* he is protecting will and being all adorably loving and helpful and embarrassed!!!! he is the best!! i like the gilbert grape card!!! *grin* you're too smooth for me!! that was awesome!! i love you!!! this is an awesome fic!! thank you so much for always updating and being such a super duper perrrrfect writer!! *glomp* i love you sooooo much!!!! *kisses* thank you thank you thank you thank you!!! *huggles* please write more soon!!!
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting...things really started to develop with J/W (yay). it was sudden, but cute and believable. you've done great character development, and i can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! post soon...
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! An update! Woo Hoo!!! And I am definitone one of the Jebus users in the world! My favorite expression!! I like the story a lot!! Poor will, Swann's a jackass! Keep going! Lets see some more!!
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this totally brilliant kick-ass chapter!!!!!!!!!! Jack's conflict over how honorable he's being with Will is hysterical...and I just loved the post-melt down interaction between tho ofo of them...seduction, crying, cuddling...oooohhh...Will's sooooo cute when he's having mood swings - can't wait to see what's going to happen now that Jack's taken little Will-bear under his wing. I'm completely psyched for your next update. You rock Lydia!!!!!!!!
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
exellent as always. Jack was wonderful and confused in this one... it was sweet. I'm glad we finally got the rape out in the open. I mean, jack needed to know soon... ohhhhhh, and submissive Will? YUM!
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is going so freakin' great. I love it. Finally, it looks like there is hope now between them. I loved the parts when Will holds onto Jack for emotional support. Beautiul. Now, hurry up and post more chappies. *Huggles* ^_^
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*does a 100th-review jig*
Awww @ all the Will angst. Loving it, really I am...LMAO @ Gilbert Grape. Very clever of you :p It's good to see Jack really does have a heart and it *finally* looks like Will might eventually warm up to him. Just how many chapters is this thing going to be?
PS. Can't think of any other ways to get feedback?! You don't call 100 reviews feedback? :p
Awww @ all the Will angst. Loving it, really I am...LMAO @ Gilbert Grape. Very clever of you :p It's good to see Jack really does have a heart and it *finally* looks like Will might eventually warm up to him. Just how many chapters is this thing going to be?
PS. Can't think of any other ways to get feedback?! You don't call 100 reviews feedback? :p
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one of the most entertaining stories ever! loved that 'pregnant-lady-on-estrogene', great one. plus - i love bikers, the freedom you feel while going 80mph...
:) keep writing i put your story in my recs!
:) keep writing i put your story in my recs!
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite entertaining! Good job.
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's such an interesting plot and so beautiful written....I eagerly await each new chapter! Please write on Lydia and Thank you!
*still sniffing because of Will and his "so called" father*
*still sniffing because of Will and his "so called" father*